omg my head is pounding.. what was that about Report Review
its was confusing but i liked it alot. it was a good read in my opinion. i just filled in wat i thought was missing... Report Review
Woah... say what?? So this is Draco/Hermione, Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Hermione?? Bloody hell, what's up?? 1O/1O
~SiriusAuthor's Response: thanks a lot its very intense Report Review
ok that was really good i think i got it
hermione is with ron, but she is cheeting on him with draco because she didnt like the way ron treated her. No one was suspose to find out abaout her being with draco, but people did, and now ron wanted to kill draco. harry is helping ron, becuse he is also in love with hermione, but she didn't know that. hermione thinks thta harry ron and draco are dead, so she kills herself, and it turns out that harry isn't dead.
am i even close?Author's Response: you were exactly right but a lot of people told me it was confusing so i just didnt bother but i didnt want to delete it so yeah Report Review
I liked it. it was sad :( It made sence a little. Ha ha. Well anyway I liked it
Night CreatureAuthor's Response: thank you it seems when i tell people not to read it they do anyway i love it Report Review
That was really sad. And let me tell you it wasn't that confusing. Correct me if I'm wrong:
Head Boy /Girl (Draco/Hermione). Draco used Hermione though to his thinking he was in love, but truly was in lust as she said. Their union was a secret. Hermione actually thought she loved him.
Harry secretly loved Hermione (given).
Ron was in love w/ her. They were going out. He didn't know anything about Draco until he heard a rumor, then decided to kill Draco and Harry followed. Probably thinking that Hermione was force to "be" w/ Draco.
Hermione cared deeply for both of them and thinking that Harry had died as well couldn't find another answer for her troubles (in her depressed mind) other than killing herself. By the time Harry got to her it was too late.
Sad but it could happen. good job. Please tell the readers what Draco/Ron are, Ex: secret boyfriend/public boyfriend. Thanx.Author's Response: wow someone did understand thank you Report Review
That was extremely hard to follow.Author's Response: ill work on it Report Review
Ok, i guess i didnt really follow it, i read it twice, and i guess i was confused between the relationships between the three boys with Hermione, i mean did Draco rape her?....and use her for only one thing, and was Ron in love with her too?...im lost. But other than that i thought it was sad, in a good way, sort of romeo and juliet.Author's Response: thank you for trying to be positive it is greatly appreciated. and i know and understand. I am currently in the process of writing a story and having that as the sequel or last scene Report Review
So, she was cheating on Harry, Ron and Draco with... Harry, Ron and Draco. These stories just keep getting weirder...Author's Response: it was confused and i've recieved reviews i think im going to turn it into a short story to explain it more Report Review
I dont' understand the story. What's going on? Who is she with and why is Ron and Draco dueling? What happen?Author's Response: Ron treated her wrong so she cheated on him with Draco through circumstances. Harry never told her but he loved her. I will be writing a short story on it to explain more. Report Review
hey there. well that should be made into a short story or anovella or something because it is really good and has potential. i really liked it but it went by too fast. if you catch my drift
humm i totally just realized this was patrina and mary. tehehe nice story girls! man am blonde!Author's Response: well im glad you read it before you knew it was us thats special. i am turning it into a short story. and i will try to explain better Report Review
huh?Author's Response: sorry most people feel that way im writing a short story for it and using it as a sequel. the s.s. will explain more. Report Review
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