wow, that was an amazing story! Great twist, the whole time I thought that maybe Hermione was in a coma or something and then i was soo confused when she was waiting for them! Your really a brilliant writer! Excellent work! Report Review
okay good I didnt like hermionie as a prostitute much anyways! But awsome plot and I am sure you will get her billion dollar empire for £1.50! LOL Report Review
holy shit! Hermionys a prostitute! Ive been waitng for a story to make harry fall in love with a prostitute or a stripper! I honestly have! But hermionie WOW! Report Review
Please, please, don't get angry, but I can't stand the idea of Harry ending with anyone except Hermione. I guess I can stand Luna, sometimes I flame H/G ones [;)], but this girl... *shudder*. No offense! 10/10
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My God, HERMIONE?? But that's - that's - that's - IMPOSSIBLE! No offense, of course. 10/10
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Is this girl - um, person - Hermione? It doesn't seem so. 'Cause... well... I dunno. 10/10
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I'll admit I got a bit confused since I was searching for Harry/OC pairings and didn't note that you added Harry/Hermione. It was only a tiny bit of confusion and I really liked the story. I liked how you used the Polyjuice potion in a way that I haven't really seen anone else do. Very original and very well written, 10/10. Report Review
Aww! Yay! Report Review
wow so creative.
suduction! haha. Report Review
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i liked this story.
its one of those you can read twice, and see it from different points of view.
keep on writing. :] Report Review
By the way... Have to tell you... I've read the third chapter on fanfictionnet too...! Wow, girl... That's hot! Good one that as well! Love your stories! Report Review
Oh, my God... You are brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! Report Review
i must say i was not expecting that! i love twists like that! great job! don't take this the wrong way, but i don't think you should continue the story. i think it's great just the way it is.Author's Response: Nope, that's all there is to the story, except of course for the censored chapter 3. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Very interesting how things turned out - to be honest I'd never have guessed that, but this makes a story worth reading.
On the other hand I wonder where chapter three is (as the title says "4. The Last Good-Bye").Author's Response: The original chapter 3 was a very explicit description of their lovemaking, and didn't have a prayer on getting validated. If you're really curious, you can see it in its entirety on fanfictiondotnet, it's posted there, too. Report Review
Ahh, the Polyjuice. You're right about that one. It's making an appearance in the chapter I'm writing just now, and boy am I gonna have fun!! :) So this was a huge twist!!! I love that he loved Hermione, that she was the one his heart belonged to originally, and there were so many lines in this that just broke my heart. And made me blush....hot babe. Really hot! Let's me know I can go a little hotter with my story, I'm always scared to break the rules. But this....my goodness! :) The whole premise and idea of this story was so inventive and different, and it was well-written, Harry felt like Harry to me, and the original character was great too, the Jean girl. The idea of girls in that profession in the Wizarding world is really brilliant too! Just awesome. Realistic, you know? Well, I loved this. I hope you write more stories, if not more to this one, because I'm still a fan over here!!! You're still on my faves so I'll always be able to check back and see if you've got anything new out! 24/10....if you ask me. :) I loved it!!Author's Response: Thanks for the outstanding review! There was a chapter 3, but it had no chance of getting validated, so I just skipped it and put the short, watered-down version at the beginning of the last chapter. I hope I didn't make to too obvious what was going on in the previous chapters, the idea was to save the twist for the end.
Again, thanks a bunch for taking the time to review, I appreciate it! Report Review
OK, that was sort of disgusting. Well, that visit was!!! Anyway, keep writing different stories. Use your imagination!!:-D That's my advice!!
-shinymusic626Author's Response: Disgusting? This story isn't done, 1 more chappy to go. Report Review
Wow, how exciting. Write somemore. I think your'e good. Keep it up!!:-)Author's Response: Thanks a bunch, there's more on the way. This should be a 4 chapter story. Report Review
sooo it was hermione...Author's Response: (evil laugh continues) Report Review
Quite a strange situation that unfolds here, and somewhat unreal as I would not really have imagined her to do that kind of job (that assumes that my perception of her job is correct). But the writing is very good and kinda intense; and IMHO there is a lot more to their meeting than the business part; a feature that you manage to express very well. Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yes, there's a bit more going on than meets the eye. The next chapter is up and awaiting validation, so stay tuned! Report Review
Are they getting down and dirty?!?Author's Response: Heh heh, they're about to, yes... Report Review
Right after the first paragraph I was reminded as to why I added you to my favorites before. I was worried, I'm a bit of an impulse buyer you know? But after only, what, five or six sentences, I felt better about my purchase and I know I'm gonna love your story. :)
Everything was lovely. The descriptions, the emotion, the angst, you're a brilliant writer. The pickins are a bit slim with the nature of the stories here but every once in a while you find a writer with promise, eh? :)
I liked that Hermione knew just what she was doing to Harry when she pressed against him, she IS and always was the brains of the operation after all. And the the lovey-dovey stuff at the end was nice. Heated and silky and sexy. :) Why can he never see her again? What is preventing him from just coming and going as he pleases? Hmmm, I suppose you will explain all that later in the story *sigh* I hate waiting. :) 10/10
You're author's note was funny, made me laugh, but on a serious note, can I borrow twenty bucks?Author's Response: Wow, I don't know how to respond... You sure know how to boost a girl's ego. This is a 4 part story, and I'm just hoping chapter 3 makes it through validation, it might not because it's a rather explicit description of their 'encounter.' Of course, in the last chappie you'll find out all, hopefully it'll be worth the wait.
As always, thank you for taking the time to review, you have no idea how much it pleases me! ^_^;
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keep writing plzAuthor's Response: The next chapter is awaiting validation. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
The box, much like his life, was now empty.
I really liked that l line. Actually, I liked many lines, too many to write them all on your comments page, especially when you're surely already aware of your brilliance.
Most HP stories that are after Hogwarts are crap, this is not. This is already unbelievable. You've got me hooked, I'm adding you to my favorites after one chapter because I have faith that the other chapters will be just as good. Harry was very canon, very how I see him older (nice touch with the motorcycle) and Luna was great too...hehehehe. I can't wait till you update, HURRY!!!!!!!
~Mina~Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot for your very kind review! I got a little light-headed reading it. I don't want to spoil anything, so I'll just let the story speak for itself. The next chapter is awaiting validation, so stay tuned!
Thanks again for taking the time to review! Report Review
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