Oh wow. That honestly almost made me cry. It was short and effective. Awesome job. Report Review
I think this could have been written better. It skipped a bit from first to third person, and sometimes it was confusing. A little rushed as well.
At the end though, I just sat for a while. I felt that numb longing inside, wishing Hermione was still alive. Even though the format was odd, you still made me feel tingly inside, which really is a compliment.
Sorry if I sounded harsh, it really was a very emotional story. You should be proud. (Y) (:
Very lovely, I almost cried. Great job. xx Report Review
that was so sad! it brings tears to my eyes and brings back memories. i mean ive never lost anyone but memories all the same. Report Review
Ron is sooo sweet! this is an awesome fanfic, I even cried a bit at the end. Really really good job.
Hedwig123Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so! Thanks for the review Report Review
Wow. That was absolutely incredible. Ron is such a sweetheart, he acted just the way I imagined it. I cried in the end! You did a great job of describing everything just enough so you can imagine the rest.
weasleyswizardwheezesAuthor's Response: Ron is a sweetheart isn't he. :P
Thank you for the review! Report Review
Ok, you can really write this despairng fics? This is your talent. Aside from some grammar errors this was great?
Ever write anything happy? Don't worry I can't either. Author's Response: Yeah, angst is my type of style, is had been from a really young age.
Yeah, I should be getting it beta-ed soon. Thanks. :) Report Review
This was nicely done. Sad...I liked it. Ummm...there were few tense problems that a nice proofread will catch. I enjoyed it...good job hun! : )
Liadan Lightflower &heartsAuthor's Response: Yeah, past tense things happen often to me. Thanks for the review :) Report Review
Oh my gravy... I know you're probably sick of my reviews but your stories are just brillant!!! I wonder how hard it would be for Ron. I mean we're seeing how hard it is for Hermione but Ron,wow, I bet he's going through H-E- double hockey sticks after this. Anways I love your one shots, they are wonderful little stories to read when you have a minute durning a boring class! Author's Response: I'm not sick of your reviews, I love them :D
ohh thank you so much, you make me realise why I continue writting. Again, thank you. :) Report Review
sad. if I could cry over such meanless things I would. :)Author's Response: Meaningless? You call Hermione dying meaningless? You call Ron loving Hermione meaningless?
there's a few things that could be fixed up here and there. Otherwise it's a good story, definately a longer legth for which I read it as ages and ages ago, though there are big gaps between paragraphs, I think that can be fixed though, right?Author's Response: Thank you for your lengthy review. I appreciate it :D Report Review
Ahhh *cries* I love this. It so sad and makes me want to cry though. Well I like this so I think I'm going to check out another of your stories lol. This was great. *Stargazer*Author's Response: Ohh thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
Wa!!! I can't believe you made me cry!!!
Amazing story! I'm amazed at your writing, I could see everything in my head, gosh, such an excellent story!!!
Loved it, please write more!! But not so sad this time...maybe a happy ending?
PS: I loved it (again, lol), and I loved the fact that it was not cheesy or anything. Absolutely wonderful (and sad to... *sniff, sniff*)!!!Author's Response: Thank you for the great review! I love this story too, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Do you want me to re-write the story or... make another one? lol.. if you want other stories read my other ones. :) Report Review
OMG, th-that was great, I s-seriously l-l-loved it, and about brought me to tears. Great job!!Its goin in my favs. 20/10Author's Response: Ohhh thanks! Report Review
AWWW that was so sad, it gave me goose bumps.
The imagery was really good...i could see it in my head :)Author's Response: Thank you heaps. :) Report Review
Nice peice written in first person; I personally can never write in first person without making it cheesy, but this one was nicely done. good job! -Valhalla Adonis-Snape(Skyris)Author's Response: oh thanks I appreciate it Report Review
Soo, Im pretty sure I've already left a review for this story, but I thought I should come back to tell you that even though I've read this loads of time's, it still makes me cry everytime. Its so beautifully different from alot of the other stories on here.
You know that feeling you get, when you read soemthing amazingly good? And you get goosebumps and teary eyed? That happends to me everytime I read this.
Simple yet beautiful and sad, one of my favourites ever.
You have an amazing talent to captivate the reader and keep them drawn to what you have to say. Trust me If I had your talent I would flaunt it.
Soo. Yes, this is my second review on this story, but authors love getting reviews right? :P especially good ones :D
Best of luck to you,
please keep writing,
PhoenixxAuthor's Response: Awww! Your so nice! You just said the nicest stuff! I just came back from the doctors and i needed something nice to happen so thanks.
I had no idea that that story had so much power in it! Thank you so much!
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I cried.... I love it!!!!Author's Response: aww thanks! Report Review
wow i'm crying this is so amazing, wow! wow this is so good.Author's Response: aww thanks heaps Report Review
Awww!!!! That was soooo sad. I loved your story. More emotional than mine...*shruges*Author's Response: thanks :) Report Review
that was so good
wow.. so speechless
i absolutely loved it
Author's Response: omg thanks! Report Review
Oh, that was very sad, but I guess not sad enogh. : ( I didn't cry! : ( Well written and very in charecter. Nice plot, and nice story! :DAuthor's Response: Dammit it! Report Review
You should really try and format the story better. Even though I didn't like the ending (a bit too dark for my taste), the story was quite good. Try and improve the grammar and spelling so readers have an easier time reading it.
BobAuthor's Response: What you mean by format it better?
Yeah well it is angst, which is my writting in all of my stories so it's soppose to be like that.
Yeah, I've had two beat's correct it, neither completed as you can tell.. (no offence to those who did it, I'm sure you did do stacks!) Report Review
Oh man. This was just so- so... sad. =( It touched me so much. Ohhhh. I want to cry!Author's Response: Well it's sorta ment to be like that... haha... aww I'm sorry! Report Review
This was a very well written one shot. Sad, yes, but very very good!Author's Response: Thanks heaps! *smiles* Report Review
oh wow. I am thoroughly impressed. I really like this. I'ts always hard to kill a character you love isn't it? Author's Response: For sure! Report Review
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