{reviewid: 1648636, reviewer: 'ronil_wazlib_luvr'}
29th September 2007:
I really liked it! I
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you do.
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{reviewid: 1608590, reviewer: 'wazlibsgrl'}
1st September 2007:
That was sweet! I really liked it!!
**wazlibsgrl*
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 1605109, reviewer: 'The_Nameless_One'}
30th August 2007:
Aww this is cute =] I've never read a missing moment from any of the earlier books before...it was really creative. Great job!
xo
TN1~
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, most of the missing moment stories tend to be from books six and five... but I wanted to shake things up (for myself). I'm glad you like it!
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{reviewid: 1442768, reviewer: 'JustSuper'}
1st June 2007:
Nicely done
Author's Response: Thanks.
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{reviewid: 1360081, reviewer: 'wizgirl'}
31st March 2007:
This fic was so awesome! I wished they put this in the movies.
Author's Response: Thanks, but it's actually not in canon, so it would've been an add-on.
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{reviewid: 1285748, reviewer: 'Leilana'}
30th January 2007:
Haha! Loved the disclaimer. Can I use ones like it? You know, make up my own?
Anyhoo, this is a really cute fanfic, but you might want to try re-formatting some of Hermione's long soliloquies. They're a little hard to get through.
Author's Response: You can use the same format for disclaimers if you want. I don't jealously guard my techniques. And I really do need to edit this one- but I'm glad you liked it otherwise.
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{reviewid: 1178576, reviewer: 'harryginny'}
29th October 2006:
wow thats all i have to say that last line: "I show not your face, but your heart’s desire.” i love that line
Author's Response: Glad you like it. It's a pretty powerful statement from the books, and I wanted to work it into a fanfic.
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{reviewid: 1125175, reviewer: 'wild4harryp01231'}
2nd September 2006:
I agree with the others; it was missing something that I can't quite put a finger on.... Though it is cute. :) Hermione was OOC, I think, but I think Ron was right on the $$. Also, the last part was really rushed and awkward....
There, CC is done!!! I think this was very good for an early fic! I like the title and the banner is stupendus. Keep it up!!!!! Reading your other stories, you have really improved!!!!!!!! Keep writing; you are one of my fave authors.
~*~KeNzIe~*~
Author's Response: It is missing a good deal- perhaps talent? :P The last part was strange for me to write... I had no clue how to arrange it at all. I'm glad there's improvement, though.
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{reviewid: 1108798, reviewer: 'mary_hpfan'}
18th August 2006:
cool, this is a nice one-shot =D
Author's Response: Thank you.
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{reviewid: 1074862, reviewer: 'thewaywelivenow'}
24th July 2006:
Aww how cute!
Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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{reviewid: 1052155, reviewer: 'Nymphadorax'}
6th July 2006:
Oh! That was cute and funny! I loved the ending! Nice story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 1045266, reviewer: 'kaotic_life'}
1st July 2006:
This was good, but there was something missing that I couldn't quite touch on.
Author's Response: Thank you. I actually think the same thing you did. This is one of my earlier fanfics, and I wanted to get it posted for some feedback.
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{reviewid: 1045262, reviewer: 'Lilas'}
1st July 2006:
That was really sweet! I liked it a lot!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 1045260, reviewer: 'Tora'}
1st July 2006:
Um... this had a good idea behind it, but it seemed to be missing something. Yuor spelling is nice, but some of your actual grammar structure is a little off. And why do you keep saying that Harry's fighting Snape?
Author's Response: Hermione didn't know that Harry was fighting Professor Quirrell. They all had thought it was Snape.
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{reviewid: 1038612, reviewer: 'Scizzors'}
26th June 2006:
Really good Kayleigh.
You need a banner though.
Scizzors
(aka your annoying lil' sis)
Author's Response: Yes, Kreeners.
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{reviewid: 1037205, reviewer: 'Emma_Star'}
25th June 2006:
I liked that, very sweet. Great job! 10/10
Emma~
Author's Response: Thank you.
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