Well, hello! I've been absenting from the world of reviewing for awhile, but I'm back for the time being. I only had a vague remembrance of what was going on, but I think I picked back up fairly quickly. I love all their names. I can't remember if I've told you that, but I do. I don't really have much to say (I'm still in a post-DH stupor), but update more quickly this time!! Report Review
Yeah! She sticks up for herself! I liked your comeback :P I would probably just make Dana go...uhm, you suck. Yeah. Cheesecake! It's okay, I'm lazy too. Infact, I should be doing english homework, and now I am writing 0-oAuthor's Response: Comebacks are pretty cool! I should make her say that next time. Cheesecake, lol. English homework is cool. This message has no point, does it? :P Report Review
That is mean. Sheesh. Someone needs to teach Dovie how to stick up for herself P:Author's Response: Dovie is rather shy, isn't she? :D Lol. Report Review
Yaaay! They meet! I thought Tom was rather rude. But I liked Avery. He was cool. P: Wait, so after a 100 years, Dovie HAS to switch? No choice? Or can she choose to stay on Earth?Author's Response: Tom was rude - charming, but annoying. 100 years? No, Dovies can stay as long as they want. Usually, when they choose to stay on earth, they stay for a very short period of time (to them that's around 100 years) or forever. Report Review
Aha! Dana's gonna help Tom Riddle! -Smacks self on head for not realizing it- Heehee. Yeaah. Too lazy to give you a nice long review because I am anxious to get onto the next chapter ^.^ Adios!Author's Response: Oh, no problemo! Glad you're reading it. And Tom Riddle does need help. A lot of it. Report Review
This is awesome! I just randomly decided to check out another one of your stories, and I wasn't disappointed :P I like how you keep using the name Dana, I like Dana. Dana. Has a nice ring to it ;P
She's a celestial being thing? I wonder who will require help the most. Snape? Lupin? Lily? Lol! Onto the next chapter!
Btw, I did what you said, and added a bit to Stand Still, Look Pretty. You should get an idea of what happens to Narcissa :P Keep an eye out! ^.^Author's Response: Ya, I should really think of different names other then my own. :P
Celestial being thingy sounds right to me!
Oh, yeah, Zahra you rock! I can't believe you actually listen to me ;P Report Review
heyy this fic is amazing! you play tom's character so perfectly, and its a really great story to read! please continue and update soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Tom is so hard to play. I'm updating today, I think :) Report Review
This story has now offically made its way into my favourites collection!!! WELL DONE!!!(I cant manage to get an account so not litrally but figurateiveley(however you spell it))Its a great story please continue
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I'll be continuing soon - I didn't get many reviews, so... Report Review
you butt. thats mean :P Author's Response: Lol. Lord Voldemort; teenage angst style. What can you expect? :P Report Review
This is amazing. I love the whole idea behind this story, which is really unique and everything. Dovie is a wonderful character and I really enjoyed reading this, especially with the extra 'heaven' dimension that you have added. Wonderful job. I can't wait to see what happens. :DAuthor's Response: Hey, a review! Thanks, I was starting to think that HPFF was the victim of a mass stealth bombing and all my reviewers were killed.. lol. Thanks so much for the review! I'll be updating soon - I promise. Report Review
I've read this story before, at least part of it. Maybe it was here, I don't remember. Did you post it anywhere else before?
Anyway, that photoshoot reminded me of this story.Author's Response: Oh, I hope I didn't post it anywhere else. Nah, I didn't. You probably read it on here :)
That's a beautiful photoshoot!!! I'm saving that [favourites] for further use, maybe for chapter pics... Report Review
Was this story on Quizilla? I remember reading it.Author's Response: Quizilla? I hope not, because I have no clue what that is. :P I will try to Google It right now though... so, ah, I hope not. Report Review
That was great! Please write more!Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Chapter 6 is in the process of being written right now!! Report Review
This chapter was good. I found the whole conversation between Dovie and Mehgan was amusing. Good job!
~AlexAuthor's Response: Thanks ver much! The conversations between the two are always kind of like that - Dovie rebelling, Meaghan attempting to keep her supposedly non existant temper in check while educating her at the same time. Lol, hard work for Meaghan.
Okay, so your story is great, as well as this chapter, but I think you may have gotten generations mixed up. Bellatrix went to school about thirty years after Tom Riddle graduated from Hogwarts -she was an older student when Harry's parents started school. I'll over-look it for this story just because it's so good, but I just thought you'd like to know. Good job though!
~AlexAuthor's Response: Oh, that's not Bellatrix - it's a different girl. Did I write Bellatrix somewhere there? I'll recheck it. But yes, I kind of did use some qualities to create Rowena. Thanks so much for reviewing!! Report Review
Good job at writing Tom Riddle, much better then other attempts other writer's have done. This chapter was really good as well, and your writing as always, was great. I can now really see this story going some where exciting. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
~AlexAuthor's Response: Tom Riddle's a hard character; there's so much to imagine! It's almost like utopia; every person's utopia is different. :P Not sure where that comparison came from... and thank you so much for the writing compliments! Hope you keep reading and reviewing Report Review
Hmmm...this is getting interesting. What does Dumbledore possibly know? Once again, good writing.
~AlexAuthor's Response: Thanks for the compliments! Glad you found it interesting, too. And most of all, THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING!! Report Review
This story looks very interesting. Still not quite sure how I feel about it, but the writing is good, so I definatly continue to read more. Good job so far!
~AlexAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for the compliments, Alex! From what I've seen of your writing [checking it out right now - my god, you have a ton of stories!!], yours is way better then mine. Please read and keep reviewing! Report Review
OOooh, I love it! :)
Updating is impossible. I'm just glad you got another chapter out!! Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! Yeah, updating is hard. Hard hard hard. Another problem? I'm a lazy procrastinator. Blaghghh... I'll try to have the next one out soon; I've already started writing it. Report Review
Oh. Wow. This is an awesome story. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Poor Dana. xDDAuthor's Response: Lol :P Poor Dana. Oh well, more things will happen next! Chapter 5 is posted, but validating!! Report Review
This is definately one of the best stories I've read on hpff I've read in awhile! Creative, interesting, and... well, it's just awesome xD
I am going to finish this tomorrow after school. -nods-
So, in advance: Update soon!!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it xD Taking the character aspects from my everflowing imagination and some from real life. Strange, real life...
^I'm pretty sure that it would snug layers, wouldn't it?
Its sunshine out
^There's sunshine out...
There were a few others, here and there, but I'm exhausted and don't have the energy to pluck them out. Just give it a read-over.
I loved the scene with the girls. For some reason, I really like that you described the one girl's voice as "breathy". I could totally hear how that sounded. Good word. Good chapter.
You should really try to update more quickly :(Author's Response: Will change the snugly layers, but with sunshine, I was hoping to sort of have the girl say that... oh, well, I'm change it. You rock my socks off;; you're like my review beta!!! Report Review
You've got a really awesome story here! I don't usually read the darker stories set in slytherin, but i really like yours. It's really unique and interesting, i look forward to reading more. Update soon!!! Author's Response: Wow, thanks very much! I love this story myself;; not exactly my writing, but the whole concept... I suppose I'm romanticizing Tom but... anyways, long awaited update on the way and more extremely soon!! Report Review
Eh my god. I think this is the only Tom fic on the site worth reading. Yeah, yours is definatley worth reading. At first I thought the 'angel' type was going to be annoying or lame, but it's definatley not. Tom is hot. I love your writing style, and I wish there was more to read. I hope ch.4 comes out soon! 10/10Author's Response: Thanks so much for that amazing review! I'm trying hard to finish chapter 4. :) TOM IS SOO HOTT!!!! Report Review
"darker then usually.".
^It should be "usual". I love the talk about the auras, though. It adds just the right touch to it.
The grammar and everything is much better, so major props to you. The only thing that stuck out, and I'm not sure if I mentioned this before, is after someone speaks, you capitalize "He said" or whatever. It is supposed to be lowercase. That's about it, though.
Ehehehe. *spastic giggles* Mm. I like Tom. He is one sexy future Dark Lord.
P.S. You should have more reviews.
Author's Response: Definitley sexy. I swear, if he had his 16-year-old look with his power, he could get me to join the Death Eaters any time.
Thanks again for the grammar! I went back and corrected it.
PS - I wish people would review. I guess some are just to lazy.
THANKS!!!! Report Review
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