This is great, but you need to try and spread the boundaries, this is something I've heard before oyu should really try to get creative, but other than that, I grabbed me. What happens next? UPDATE! Report Review
OMG! What just happend! You must update! Soon! Please! Thanx 10/10Author's Response: sorry. its been for ever, but I'll update right away! Report Review
hi, ummm doesnt harry have green eyes not blue? yea other than that the story is really good.Author's Response: thxs! I'm so excited, I'll update soon. Report Review
im not sure what this is leading too...but i can make you a banner if you want...just contact me on my account...Author's Response: That would be wonderful.
This will end up in a love story just so you know. thxs!
I really appreciate it. Report Review
"Boy! I don't want anything from you, not a word and deffinately no m maj................No giberish!! You understand!?"
I'm sorry, but your story could be top for plot, and it would still be difficult to read ... far too many spelling errors - they are terribly distracting. Use a spell-checker next time!Author's Response: Thanks for your advice, sorry, I'm just starting hear and I will remember to use spellcheck! :) thxs Report Review
It has potential and has really grabbed me. UPDATE SOON! :) :)
Author's Response: thanks. Sorry for all the spelling errors, I didn't quite look it over as much as needed Report Review
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