Ahha this was hilarious! I was so shocked at first like...what but you explained it all at the end :P I love little one shots like this, that could possibly fit into canon without upsetting the flow of events but are so quirky and different all the same. And Cedric's dialogue was absolutely hilarious. I was laughing the whole time through.
Your formatting is a bit messed up in parts, so you have chunks of dialgue squished together which makes this difficult to read so if you ever edit, you might want to consider fixing that. But other than that, I think this was really funny with a great ending.
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hahaha, that was very clever!
Well done to you!Author's Response: lol thank you! I appreciate it! Report Review
Lol! This is a jewel of a story! I love harry's reactions towards cedric's behavior. And hot, edible cedric, even i was a bit like 'huh?' when he was acting all weird. I loved it! Two thumbs up and a high five! =) Oh.is this just a one shot? Cause it'd be great to see his reaction when cedric realized how weird he was acting, lol. Total mortification on his part i'm sure =p.Author's Response: *dies* I really did think of doing a sequel to this, but I thought it might be overkill so I just left it as is. Nice and quirky :) Glad you liked it! Report Review
HAHA! :D I love itAuthor's Response: Thanks! Report Review
OMG! lol this is so hilarious!
*adds to favs* It was very well written, but again try to put spaces between your dialogue so your readers won't get mixed up!
I love this, at first I thought Cedric was interested in Harry! But he turns out he was drunk! lol, its brilliant!
lol, I cannot stop laughing!
Excellent work! 10/10Author's Response: Haha, thanks again for reviewing. I was definiately working the Cedric may be hitting on Harry angle. Glad you liked this enough to add it to your favorites =) Report Review
Wow, this is really good. It had me hooked up to the very end...I thought he was under the imperius curse or something. What a relief to find out that he was only drunk.
Great job!Author's Response: Haha, I love how people are telling me their thoughts of what was wrong with Cedric before it was revealed at the end. I think this is the first Imperius Curse guess. Thanks for reviewing and glad you liked it =) Report Review
*L* I know exactly how Harry felt. I kept wondering what's wrong with Cedric as well *L*Author's Response: Haha, well thus solves that great mystery ;) Report Review
This one-shot made me laugh as much as most long stories do
I was really worried about Harry as Ced kept getting closer... and closer. and closer. ROFLAuthor's Response: Thanks Metamorph! Haha, I was laughing to myself as I was writing that scene, Harry's pathetic attempt to get away into the pillar. Thanks again for reviewing =) Report Review
.What...?!Author's Response: haha, now I'm confused.... Report Review
LMAO. love it. =DAuthor's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing =) Report Review
Haha, that was great! I love it! For a minute I thought he was going to go gay, but the last sentence was a perfect ending. 10-10Author's Response: Haha, yup...I was definately working the possibly gay vibe a lot in this one. I must admit the scene in the 4th film was very influencial in this. Not to mention it the guy looked hungover a few times in the extras. Report Review
O wow. That was really funny. I was waiting and waiting for something to happen. I was like "whats up with cedric?" Ha. Really good!Author's Response: Haha, well I'm glad you thought this was funny since that was it's intent! Thanks for the review =) Report Review
hahahahaha that rocked. I really liked everything... 10/10 all the way hahahahahaahahaha that made me laugh a lot...Author's Response: Hey there. Glad this made you laugh seeing as that was the intention! As always, thanks for reviewing =) Report Review
That was perfect! I think my spleen just exploded cause I laughed so hard. Oh that was funny. Perfect! Brava! I rate a 10!Author's Response: Haha, don't hurt yourself over there! Par usual, thanks for reviewing =) Report Review
haaa thats a pisser
Well done, quite good, ahven't imagined cedroc as the drinking one before. but still i laughed. :PAuthor's Response: Haha, well I'm glad this one-shot got you to laugh! Thanks for the review =) Report Review
That was really good. It was starting to get freaky, and the ending was totally unexpected.
I like your style of writing. =)Author's Response: Hey SpringAngel, thanks for taking the time to review and the compliments. I'm glad you enjoyed it =) Report Review
ha ha ha. That was great. But you want to hear something? Through out reading this whole thing your character Cedric reminded me of other characters from other stories. Stories i had for english like Of Mice and Men, and A Separate Peace. Don't ask why, but i did. If you've read the books you might understand. ;D Anywho, that was really quite a fun read, i just woke up not long ago and that nice for morning. :D well ciao!Author's Response: Hmm, I've read Of Mice and Men but I'm not sure what character you would be referring to that Cedric reminded you of. I have selective memory when it comes to high school, such as I choose not to remember any of my boring English classes...haha. Anyways, glad to know this got your morning off to a good start! Thanks for reviewing =) Report Review
That was so FUNNY!! I loved the writing style and the way it ended just made me laugh so much. I hope you write soooo many more. Author's Response: Hey there! Thank you for taking the time to review and I'm glad you enjoyed this one-shot. I'm quite proud of it myself =) Report Review
............AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! That was so funny! Very well written, and the end was hilarious! ^^Author's Response: Hey there silver phoenix, good to hear from you! I wish I could find my humor writing skills again, I seem to have lost them after writing this! Anyways, glad you found this story humorous and thanks for reviewing =) Report Review
wow...just, oh, wow. first i thought cedric was playing some game with harry and then get him when he least expected it...and then i thought he was gay lol. this has got to be on of the funniest fics ever.Author's Response: Well I admit that I was moderately playing the 'possibly gay' angle, it was just to good to pass up. Haha, well I'm glad you thought it was funny! Report Review
Keep going hurry!!Author's Response: Haha, well I'm glad you liked it enough to want to read more! Unfortunately this is just a one-shot. Report Review
:-0 :)) i was starting to get a bit worryed... nice and odd chapter but i like it:)Author's Response: Haha, I'm getting quite a lot of the 'that was odd' reviews. Oh well, at least it was enjoyable all the same. Thanks for the review =) Report Review
Wow. That was an interesting one.
A bit... odd.
I liked it.Author's Response: Haha, well I'm glad you liked it despite it's oddness =) Report Review
Very Original! I really didnt know how you were going to end this, when I saw the page nearing the bottom. I thought they were going to argue or something. Thanks for the good read.Author's Response: Hmm, arguing...that's one thing that never came to mind as an option. Probably because I knew Cedric was drunk the whole time and I decided to make him a happy, friendly drunk. Haha, anyways thanks for reviewing and glad you enjoyed reading this! Report Review
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Man this was funny!! CED??? BEST MATES??? What an idiot. I figured he was either drunk or gay. At least I was halfway there!! But man, I could tell it was awkward for Harry, especially talking to Cedric about Cho.... naked.... Yeah, that's when the gay thought came in. Then when he talked about ced and best mates?? Man, he was trashed. So he could have been gay AND drunk. But still a great one shot!! Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA oh man, I love your reviews. Geez, I really do tortured Harry a lot in every one of my stories, eh? First emotionally, then some psychological traumatization, some physical pain, now this. I'm just terrible. But hey, at least it's entertaining! Report Review
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