77 Reviews Found

Review #1, by TomFoolery Chapter 5 Preview

1st June 2004:
And here's where I find you lost... let me think a bit. It's good though, however short...

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Review #2, by TomFoolery Chapter 4

1st June 2004:
Ok, it's another good chapter, I'm not going to lie about that at all. Going on now...

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Review #3, by TomFoolery Chapter 3 Revised

1st June 2004:
Maybe I just missed it. What is Mark's relation to Sarah? I know there must be someting from the last names. Oh well, it's a great chapter at any rate.

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Review #4, by TomFoolery Chapter 2

31st May 2004:
Voldemort is Lily's grandfather, and they had another child. So that would make Harry and this new chick his great great grandchildren. Wow, things are really heating up... another good chapter...

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Review #5, by TomFoolery Chapter 1 Revised

31st May 2004:
Wow. It's a great start, and I can't see any signs of writer's block as of yet. It's completely fantastic. The only comment that I would make is that since the founders started Hogwarts in the early part of the millenium, their language might have been more structured and less colloquial. Other than that, it's brilliant! I think I've talked to you in the shoutbox before, but I never thought to ask you if you wrote any fics. Now I know, and I'm glad I do...

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Review #6, by Michelle Chapter 1 Revised

7th February 2004:
This chapter has a huge relation with GOF which makes the reader really into the story. I like the Flashback thing and the idea with the torch

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Review #7, by Michelle Chapter 3 Revised

7th February 2004:
This chapter was my favorite..you put alot of effort into Mark. This chapter shows love and care

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Review #8, by fcuking cathy Chapter 1 Revised

30th January 2004:
good good good!!!

Author's Response: Yeah i could email you when i update..ill just send you the entire chappie.

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Review #9, by fcuking cathy Chapter 5 Preview

30th January 2004:
hey this is an awesome fic!!! is it on any other sites? are there any ways of knowing when you have updated??? fcuking cathy come_back_queen@hotmail.com

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Review #10, by ~c.evans~ Chapter 5 Preview

28th January 2004:
One more thing , you could let them meet before Hogwarts , just not now each other's name or somthing . And you don't have to do it during the sorting if you want . Knowing Harry , he will probably miss it .

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Review #11, by ~c.evans~ Chapter 5 Preview

28th January 2004:
wow - I haven't reviewed your story in such a long time !! Anyways , I love where this fic is going . I think you should let Harry and Mark meet at Hogwarts . When his name is called out for the sorting , you could make Harry's reaction shocked , not to mention comical . ( As soon as Harry heard the name he had stiffened , dropped his cup , causing the drink to spill , and forgetten to close his mouth "Mark evans ?? EVANS !!! this has to be some sort odd coincidense !! yes , evans is not so uncommon . After all , I have no other living relatives . " Ron noticed the confused expression his friend was wearing . "Are you all right , Harry ? You look a bit pale..." ) well this is just my thought . but do what you like . And if you take my advise , re-write it yourself . You're far more talented than I . Anyways , hablaremos espues . chao !! ~carolina~

Author's Response: i like you idea alot..il combine yours and silver's idea together and ill see what i come out with..i should have the chappie out by next week..hopefully..

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Review #12, by esanoussi Chapter 1 Revised

28th January 2004:
good chapter, but u copied Freddy Kruger with that Elm Street thing, u know that right?

Author's Response: Freddy Kruger? No actually i didn't..I used elm street cuz i used to live there..thnx for the review!

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Review #13, by CharityPotter Chapter 5 Preview

25th January 2004:
hey shakira! nice story! i hope you update soon again! haha...sorry i haven't reviewed in a while...lol...well, gots to go!

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Review #14, by baby_gurl Chapter 5 Preview

25th January 2004:
This story does seem to be a good sequal to your other story. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! =P

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Review #15, by SilverPhoenix Chapter 5 Preview

25th January 2004:
oh! That's where Mark Evans came from! I totally forgot about that... I say a little before Hogwarts, so Mark meets Harry as the bad boy. Harry could like save him from another Dudley attack... Thats just how i've always pictured it... Great job! and thnx for r/r my story!

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Review #16, by Kristen Chapter 5 Preview

25th January 2004:
Hey! I've read your story his morning and I think it's really good, keep going! I was going to tell you something else, but I have just forgotten about what it was. Oh, well, if I ever remember I let ya know.. good work!

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Review #17, by iwpotter Chapter 5 Preview

21st January 2004:
Sounds good so far. Update soon.

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Review #18, by riaJem Chapter 4

19th January 2004:
hey sweetie! i just got ur review :) thanx for staying with me all this time ! ok, for the recommendations, you must log out of your account first. go to 'home 'in the upper right corner, there's a box that says "site links" the third one down says "recommended stories" click on that, and you'll get to the section. scroll down until you get to the very bottom, there's a bunch of writing down there .. [Well, there it is, these are Tracy`s top fanfiction stories...] if you keep on reading, a part will say: send them to us by filling in the form which can be found here. click the underlined 'here' and fill out the form and you're on you're way! btw, thank you so much! :)

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Review #19, by Emma Rose Chapter 4

19th January 2004:
Another awesome chapter! I can't wait till you write more! ~Emma~

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Review #20, by Emma Rose Chapter 3 Revised

19th January 2004:
I LUV IT!!! oooo please continue please please please! ~Emma~

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Review #21, by SilverPhoenix Chapter 4

18th January 2004:
awesome! PLease please please put Harry in and update soon!!!!!!

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Review #22, by riaJem Chapter 4

18th January 2004:
YES! you SHOULD hurry up and post it! :P well thank you for constantly checking back :) i really appreciate it! i've added a new chappy, so go check it out :)

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Review #23, by ~c.evans~ Chapter 4

17th January 2004:
Great !! But poor Mark is going to get beatin up !! Isn't he ? he'll meet Harry eventually . Anyways , i really love this story . Hablaremos espues

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Review #24, by esanoussi Chapter 1 Revised

17th January 2004:
luv the story! keep writing!

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Review #25, by Paige Chapter 4

17th January 2004:
AWESOME!!!!! PLZ ADD MORE!!!!!!

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