good story, nice plot.

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how cute

Author's Response: thanx

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once again, very short, but i see where it is going.

Author's Response: thanx

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this chapter was very short. that isn't bad, but i think it lacked a few dtails. you could have put more in there about the ride, and hermione would have never gone to sleep. but that's why i love fanfiction! out of character doesn't matter! i'm off to read the next chapter----->yippee

Author's Response: thanx!

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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! it's so cute!!! I love it!!

Author's Response: Thanks, i think that was my favorite chapter to write!

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good chapter!! hehe very cute :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I like that chapter to.

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Good Chapter, but that's it. I think you should have worten some more, but pelase dont take it offensivly.
Good chapter.
update soon.


Author's Response: oh... yeah, i forgot to tell everyone that the story is complete, but it isn't completly posted here so my be i need to put that in the summary...

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that was really good for your first fic...there were only a few minor spelling mistakes(just do a quick read over and correct them) but other than that it was good! i look foreward to reading the sequal but i hope it's a bit longer than this one.

P.S. if u want i could make u a banner for this story and the sequal, all i would need is ur e-mail :) (hehe i luv making banners!)

wuv ya~dreamer


Author's Response: well, there aare 7 chapters to the story so... i just haven't finished posting it all. I think the sequal will be longer than 7 chaps though. You can make a banner if you want, my email is whitwhit_luvs_u@yahoo.com

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wow!i can't belive this is your first fan fic!!Keep writing!!It's amazing and i can't wait to read more of what happens between "the two luv birds"


I LOVE FLUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE FLUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE FLUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanxs for the comment... yep sure is my first fic. It was kinda a spur of the moment thing after my friend Jessica told me she was writing one so i thought, "This might be fun." I also write original fiction so if you want to read some of that i could let ya.

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That was great!PLeze write more!I LOVE FLUFF!!!!!!!!!!I LOVE FLUFF!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVE FLUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanx again. the story will be a total of 7 chaps so you know i have to get them posted so everything is finished just not posted.

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pretty good


Author's Response: Thanks bunches, this was the first fan fic i wrote so it isn't the best. I don't have others on this site at the moment, but i will eventually so don't forget to check them out.

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