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Review #1, by AussieAnatomy627 Staring at The Sun

11th November 2008:
This was a very well written story.

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Review #2, by LĂșthiel Lupin Staring at The Sun

21st June 2006:
A great fanfic that shows the huge love that Remus feels for Tonks. it's time that remus become more optimistic

Author's Response: Isn't it just? Thank you for reading and reviewing this piece, and I'm so pleased to hear you enjoyed it.

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Review #3, by steve34 Staring at The Sun

13th June 2006:
Very touching. I find myself almost moved by the amount of love he is feeling, and yet there is a larger part of me laughing and thinking "Boy, men are stupid and corny when they're in love." Sadly, I'm not laughing at him, but laughing with him as I know I've had similar thoughts in the past that I look back on now and think "Boy, I was stupid and corny...". Excellent piece of work here, as always. :-)

Author's Response: Coming from someone who likes this ship as much as I do I take it as a huge compliment that you've even read this. I'm also flattered that my writing provokes this questioning reaction in an equally intelligent, thoughtful, creative man. This was a bit of an uphill struggle for me, partly because I'm struggling to write anything, and partly because I forced myself to write the ship. It hurt! Lol So, with that in mind, a huge thank you for the feedback and support.

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Review #4, by delta Staring at The Sun

10th June 2006:
BJ, you've written another wonderful story! You've portrayed Remus's mixed emotions wonderfully, touching on everything in his mind and in his heart - and you've shown that through all, as Dumbledore said, love is the most powerful weapon of all. I really liked the sugar thing - very creative of you, and your description is beyond measure. Great job!

Author's Response: The sugar thing was something very childish, but something I thought of as being 'Tonks-like!' I agree about love being the one true thing, so yes, I used that theme here too. Thank you for your encouragement and thoughtfulful review.

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Review #5, by Rae Staring at The Sun

7th June 2006:
THIS IS AN AMAZING LUPIN STORY!!!!!!! Very good job!

Author's Response: Thank you Rae! Glad it was enjoyable.

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Review #6, by Violet Gryfindor Staring at The Sun

7th June 2006:
*sigh* It's positively brilliant to see another fic by you and this one is such a beautiful story. Your Remus is so romantic and loveable - the type of guy a girl would just love to bring home with her. His thoughts and feelings are very clear and vivid within this story and the imagery you've used throughout blew me away. It's all so poetic, which is perfectly fitting to the subject matter. The last paragraph was especially beautiful, with the metaphors about the sun and its warmth. Honestly, BJ, whatever sort of plot bunny you had to write this is one that I'd dearly love to meet. For someone who's not much into the Remus/Tonks ship, you wrote about it wonderfully and gave Remus' point of view in a way that very few others ever could. =)

Author's Response: *hugs* Thank you dearest. You're always incredibly supportive, and this review is wonderful bearing in mind how you know I struggle with this ship.

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Review #7, by sageofdawndreams Staring at The Sun

7th June 2006:
Wow. All I can say is wow. I adore the imagery and the feeling that are behind each and overy word. Well done I say well done! *claps hands*

Author's Response: Thank you Sage. I struggled with this one a little so I'm pleased to here you like it.

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