How sad! The emotions seemed really real. Good first chapter!Author's Response: thanks for the comment, glad you liked it
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hmm...I have to say that this story is very vague and chilling, but I like it. There are some sentences that are hard to understand, a few spelling mistakes, but I think a good re-reading and editing on your part would fix them. Otherwise, great story. :)Author's Response: thanks, i was trying not to go into too much detail with what has to be said, but was worried about it being too vague.. nosensical sentences are my speciality... lol, thanks Report Review
Oh my gosh. I didn't really like slash fanfics but now that is different.
Please Update soo.
Author's Response: Thanks.... my first review on it... yay!! Report Review
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