Wow! That story was amazing! I loved how you worked it all out in the end. Gj! Report Review
that was an awesome story but it totally shocked me when she killed herself and her baby! that kinda was like wut the hell? but over all it was gr8! Report Review
That was excellently written. It was very emotional. The only thing i don't understand why she would do is killing herself. I mean she obviously completely regretted killing Melanie and felt horrible for it, but it was all in vain. I mean she killed her in the first place to protect herself, but then ended up killing herself and the baby anyway. Plus she wasn't only killing herself she completely disregarded the fact that she was killing another life at the same time. Her unborn child. Anyways I still liked the story a lot.10/10. Well done. Peace.Author's Response: Dont ask. I wrote it and then I psoted it and I was like, omg I wish I hadn't have done that. But otherwise I like it =) Thanks for the review. Report Review
That was so sad! And also very amazing, but so sad!
- RitaAuthor's Response: Thank you!! Report Review
Why? Why? Why?Author's Response: I dont know =( lol Report Review
That's so sad! I was crying durning the end.
10/10Author's Response: Oh, really? That means a lot acctually =) Thanks. Report Review
that was a wicked awesome story!!!
it's deffinently goin in my favs!
10Author's Response: Oh, wow, thanks ;P Report Review
OMG OMG OMG! I am staring at my computer in uter shock! That is amazing! Report Review
This was really good! Where did you get the pictures of the girls in the banner?Author's Response: Uhm. I dont remember, lol. I had them sitting in my folder for a long time. I dont even remember who it is. Its the same girl BTW :) Thanks. Report Review
OMG!!! WOW!!! Melanie is such a. Poor, poor Caydence. Are these Bella's daughters?? Well, probably. Nice jobAuthor's Response: Aw, thanks. And yes, I did intend for them to be Bella's daughters :) Report Review
Sniff. V.sad,but good.Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
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