wonderful! could you make an alternate version where Harry ends up with hermione? and it's accepted not excepted. Report Review
Still wondering if anyone's going to write a fic where Harry isn't half-retarded. as a man who suffered more than his fair share of tragedy when i was younger, i know that if anything it matures you rather than turn you into an insecure, overly emotional boy. Of course, i love the story and can't wait to finish it and head to the next one.i'm just sayin... Report Review
Fantastic, I have not posted a reply because I just could not stop until I was finished. I hope in your future you settle on writing. You weave a good story and I hope to read more of your books in the future.
Good luck to you,
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This was the best chapter so far, you had me laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes. My son came in to find out what was so funny. I told him and he also was on the floor. The story gets better each chapter, thank you. Report Review
I love this story, it has more twist and turns plot on plot, I think I also know a little more about the author, Parvati is so part of you, you truly love this person, like looking in a mirror.
:) Report Review
Good, I like it, one less Report Review
poor Ron, he just doesn't get it, good chapter, should have kept Malfoy a roach for a week with everybody looking for him. Report Review
great to this point, and this chapter was just fine, I have been to so many pointless meetings in my life, what can I say.
Broom races in the great hall? go for it. Report Review
A toad, LOL, this is great, I don't know why you thought this chapter was going to be pointless, it makes me want to read more, and more. Thanks for the laugh, a toad. :) This was your best work to date. Report Review
Wonderful poem, so the sorting hat has decided to take a power, good for it. Let a human do his dirty work.
I love this story as much as the last one, Report Review
great so far, I would love to be able to do that, but alas we can't Report Review
I like it, young love. :) Report Review
WOW, three chapters in and I am making my first review. I could not stop reading, I am also glad you continued the story.
I know you wrote this a couple years ago and I am new to the site, for me its brand new, so thanks for a great story.
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haha i love saying i love you..
makes me feel warm and fuzzy!! Report Review
Ginny kicking Ron in the bum!!
whats up with tonks =S Report Review
harry seems evil now :| Report Review
i can't believe harry accidently killed her..
but she deserves it.. Report Review
i reali don't want weasley dying!! :(
btw i forgot to mention earlier the sorting hat song was fantastic!! Report Review
wow bye bye sorting hat. Report Review
"No, itís just the first time youíve spent the night with me and my best mate,Ē Harry joked
hahahahaha Report Review
eww i don't like eros at all..
but then ive always wanted ginny and harry together. Report Review
fantastic chapter your a good writer :) Report Review
i can't believe she is a witch!!
great story Report Review
Just wanted to say I think this is a really good story. I think it's great when people manage to put enough effort into their writing to do a whole novel. Well done! Report Review
I loved this story so much!!! I am going to read the next story!! Thanks for making FanFiction rock! Report Review
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