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Review #1, by delta Exchanges

9th June 2006:
Aah, cliffie! Grrrrrrrr, you better update soon! This was a really good start, and the description of everything was really well done. Your portrayal of Dudley was laughable, and the scene in the beginning was quite interesting. Great job! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I'm flattered! *blush* I was really aiming at good description and making the bit about Dudley humourous. I'm so glad it shone through. I'll try to update as soon as I can. Thank you so much for your review! =D

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Review #2, by bluegirl Exchanges

7th June 2006:
hmmmm...what is she going to say?
very nice story. you have a couple of spelling errors but thats about it. very nice story and great description!
-britt

Author's Response: You'll find out soon! And thanks. I'm glad you like the story so far! I didn't have it completely beta'd at the time, so the spelling errors should be fixed now. Thanks so much for reviewing! =D

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Review #3, by aly091 Exchanges

7th June 2006:
Like I've said before your story is awesome and is really going to finish well. You didn't even need me to BETA for this chapter, I'm not even going to mention anything I found wrong. Just send me the next chapter when you have it finished and need it edited! I'm so proud of you! *tear* They just grow up so fast *sniffle* Good luck! Alyssa

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks Alyssa! =D I'm glad you like it and I'm so grateful for you being able to beta for me. Thanks so much! I'll send you the next chapter as soon as it's done. =)

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Review #4, by gryffruler28 Exchanges

5th June 2006:
Hey, this mystery figure - who's he (or is it she)?? It's a ghost? Seems like one - the figure did not actually walk through the door of the building, but rather, through the very wall of the building itself. Let me guess - Dumbledore? No? Oh well, at least I tried :p Hey, why didn't we get to read Ginny's letter? Was it that personal?

Ah, finally! The confrontation. Aunt Petunia's goin' to tell Harry the whole thing, right? I'd like to know that myself :) She seems nice, somehow *doubtful*

Anyway, great start. Keep it up! I'll give you a bonus - thumbs up :p

Author's Response: I won't tell you anything accept that we've met the character in the series before, you have to try to guess who! =D But, nope, they're not a ghost. ;) Good guess though!


Well Ginny's letter was between her and Harry... cute little love notes of sweet nothings, you know... personal stuff! Lol. XD


Well hopefully Aunt Petunia'll spill... we'll have to see! And about her being nice... hmm, maybe you're on to something! Oops! I won't say anymore. =X


Well thank you! =D I'm glad you like it so far! *is honoured by the thumbs up*


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Review #5, by SiriuslyCrack Exchanges

5th June 2006:
Woah, great beginning! I guess you'll have to stick like glue, you don't mind, do you? :p So, Petunia is hiding something? The sneaky thing...is she gonna tell Harry in the next chapter?

What about that mystery figure? Will we be able to guess who it was? Anyway, I want to read Ginny's personal letter *wails* Why can't I? ;)

Great chapter! Will you kindly PM me when the next chapter is here? Thanx

Author's Response: Yup! Petunia's been hiding something. =D Will she reveal it in the next chapter? Hmm... maybe! Lol! You'll have to find out for yourself, hehe.



And yes, you can try to guess the mystery figure as it's someone mentioned in the books, but I won't tell you who yet! You have to guess. And no, it's not Voldemort. =)



Aw! Well you can't read Gin's letter because well... it's Harry's! You wouldn't want to read a personal letter from a boyfriend in front of a crowd of strangers would you? lol.



And will do with the PM. ;)


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Review #6, by kikki Exchanges

4th June 2006:
I think it was really well written and a good start of a hopefully good story. You caught me and I'm going to follow this story as long as it keeps this standard absolutely.

Author's Response: Aw! Thank you! I'm really glad you like it so far. =D Hopefully I'll be able to update soon!

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