7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Toujours Padfoot The Bold, The Cunning, The Wise, The Caring

1st March 2013:
I thought this was a nice summation of the feelings the Founders had towards each other, and I liked their physical markers with honeysuckle hair, facial scruff, etc. It was a visual image with just enough details.

I particularly liked your portrayal of Slytherin's appearance with dead, dull eyes and thin scars gouged in his face. Your word choice in describing him brought to mind an almost cartoonish sort of villain, with 'minions' and delighting in watching others suffer. As there are quite a lot of villains like this in canon (Vernon Dursley is remarkably unforgiving and one-note), I don't see this as anything negative.

Helga sounds quite nice, giving everyone a chance regardless of background. Rowena is at once fair but still placing her allegiance with Godric; your description of Godric with a 'heart like a dragon' was very apt.

There were a few typos, which made the sentences somewhat hard to read, and since you did not identify which characters were which in the separate scenes, it would have been helpful to make their individual passages longer so that readers could better figure out who they were.

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Review #2, by megthechef43 The Bold, The Cunning, The Wise, The Caring

1st March 2013:
Padfoots Girl 32,

I think the first two sentences should be combined in my opinion because the first sentence states the subject and the send one describes it. But, I think you did a great job with the imagery in the brave paragraph. It was a beautiful painted scene with the castle. I like your take on each of the founders and their take on the final battle. I don't get the ending at all. I'm not sure which three people join them because a lot of people died during the war. Just a thought.

I like it though!

Megthechef43 aka Meg

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Review #3, by Princess Di The Bold, The Cunning, The Wise, The Caring

17th November 2007:
Deep? Sort of? IDK what to tell you.

Author's Response: OK.

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Review #4, by Weasley twins rock The Bold, The Cunning, The Wise, The Caring

20th January 2007:
I think that is summed them all up wonderfully!

Author's Response: Well, Thank you very much~Jessica

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Review #5, by Hermione33 The Bold, The Cunning, The Wise, The Caring

4th August 2006:
Hi, I am Hermione33 and i was sorta wondering if u want to read my updates in Lovers' Kiss? Cause I'm getting no more reviews and i see no point of continunng if i get no reviews... *sigh* Oh well, i wanna comment on ur story. I love four founder stories and yours is a good way of expressing and desribin them. bye-bye.

Author's Response: Sure I'll read it and thank you.~Jessca


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Review #6, by weasley_twins The Bold, The Cunning, The Wise, The Caring

1st July 2006:
i'll give you an 8 and a half. i was a little bit confused at it. but thats just cause im stupid. ya kno your stupid cousin. lol. well, i read it through twise. and i think i got it. it's supposed to mean that they are making a birthday cake....huh....huh....no, not it. darn...lol, jk. it's good. i love your stories. now if i could only get you to read mine. well, ttyl, and i cant wait to come and visit you. ttyl. nw to read your other story.

-love ya favorite cousin~zing!

Author's Response: you're not stupid just weird lol well i'm sorry you were confussed but this story was spur of the moment.I'm glad you like my stories. And if you would write something besides hg/dm i might read them lol.~Chue Chie (your fav cousin)

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Review #7, by Unicorn Girl The Bold, The Cunning, The Wise, The Caring

7th June 2006:
Interesting inside on the four founders. I think u made Salazar a little to evil...but the rest are okay.

Author's Response: thanks. I know he's a little bit more evil thn you'd think but if you look at voldenort , snape or the mafoys who are trying to be like slytherin you got to think just how bad could he be or get to be. thanks for the review~jessica


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