i love this story! please update soon!!! 100/100!!!!! it was superb!Author's Response: Thank you, but I must say I am sorry. My laptop got taken when my house was broken into a few weeks ago and I lost all my work that included my next two chapters and I have to start all over again. But the good news is that I'm trying to write the second chapter-again- right now, at this moment (Even though it's 5:48 AM!!!). So I should be sending it to my beta soon. Thanks again and I hope you understand!
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Damn interesting. I like your preview idea, not many would have thought of that. But try not to put it too long, otherwise the whole chapter would be revealed. Second chapter sounds interesting!Author's Response: Thank you PotterLogic! The second chap is -suppost- to be a long one, I'm still working on it. I'm glad you liked my work! It's nice to get all these nice remarks, although if any of it you found wierd or something please tell me! Once again, thanks. next chappy coming soon!
Lori xxx Report Review
i cant wait for next part :)Author's Response: *Smiles* It's on the way. Just got to write a little more before sending it to my beta and it should be done. Report Review
Write more it was great!Author's Response: *Laughs* Thanks! It's soo good to know it was great. I have worked hard on it and it's nice to get some good feed back from it. But remember! If there is anything you don't like tell me! You gotta love it or hate it! next chapter coming up soon! Report Review
this story is really really good keep writing itAuthor's Response: *Smiles* Thank you, I'm so glad you like it. This gives me soo much more will to write. The next chapter coming up soon! Report Review
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