You are a complete poser. This whole idea was taken from Spellbounds Dark Blue. You may not be taking her exact words but taking her idea is just as bad! You're practically advertising it too!! She's your only favorite author and Dark Blue is your only favorite story. You couldnt even write it better either! -1010193749087349082342/10 for stealing and making it worse! Report Review
FYI : At the time of the Marauders, Dumbledore was headmaster, as he got his position sometime in the 1940's as it is inferred in HBP.Author's Response: Uhm, thanks. I'll get on changing that then. Sorry about that. I guess I didn't catch that inference. Report Review
That was really good! I just sat down and read all the chapters, I think you should definetely write some more! If you can't think of what to write, just give it some time. Write, even if it doesn't make sense, then go back and change it to sound a bit better! Don't give up!!Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm really sorry I haven't gotten any new chapters up lately! I have them written but you wouldn't believe how long it takes to get them approved. Report Review
really nice i like her powers. lol update soon!!!!!!!!!!!Author's Response: Thanks.
I thought it would be fun to have her destroy stuff. Report Review
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