this was good..I like it..
but at the beginning. where you introduced Narcissa and her sisters, she is the youngest one; but Bellatrix is the oldest one, then Andromeda, then Narcissa.
just thought i'd point that out.
other than that, i like the story
=]Author's Response: Thank you.
Oh, whoops. I always see Andromeda as the oldest, most independant... hmm... Report Review
It's written really nicely, I don't know, just I don't particularly like the idea, and Lucius getting her a pool...I don't know, it's probably just me, but it's written well:) xx addi.Author's Response: Lol. Thanks for the review. & loff to you for the compliment on my writing. Meh, to each their own, right? Glad you thought it was well written! :) Report Review
OMG. This is just perfect! Absolutely perfect; no other way to describe it! Although (if you allow me to be a bit of a pain), you might wanna go through the spelling. Anyway, P-E-R-F-E-C-T.Author's Response: :P Spelling. I will go through it again - see what I can do. Thank you so much for your compliments! *Overwhelmed at my family computer with my waterbottle* You rock so much, darling, for all these comments! Report Review
Is a chapter for your Sirius/OC validating cause I'm compleatly addicted to that ship and will cry if it's just an idea you have... lol. ~EmilyAuthor's Response: Oh, I'm making it. It's just the stupid Last Dance chappie won't validate... Grr.....
And more Marauders shall be coming soon :) Report Review
hahahaha, shows what a random search brings up. This is good! It's not the whole line of 'poor Narcissa, forced to marry the b*****d.' lol. But a whole differnt line. I loved this, do you have any more? Much Love, EmilyAuthor's Response: Marauders Series, darling :) Thanks for the comments and lol to the random search. Report Review
Hmm... Enjoyable to read. Nice.Author's Response: Thanks very much. I try. Report Review
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