Good story, bad ending. Come on what happens next.xxx Report Review
aww, what a sweet ending :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! -Shea Report Review
aww james is so sweet! i loved him :) great story. i had fun reading it :) 10/10Author's Response: Thank you very much! I love it when someone has fun reading my stuff, it's the best form of flattery there is! Thanks again for making my day! -Shea Report Review
hello again! i thought this story was so wonderful i decided to read it again! i just love this plotline. As for Amos, I never liked him much. I think him and Cedric were idiotic ladies men! My story is out now - Angel. Have you read it? If not, please do, and please review. That rhymes, lol. Great story, ginevrahermione.Author's Response: wow, thanks. thanks a lot. I'm so psyched that someone actually likes my writing that much! you rock my toe socks! - don't laugh. I'm a huge fan of toe socks, and it's quite the honor that you rock them, really. :P LOL! I never really liked Cedric myself, however Robert Pattinson... he's just yummy. I'm officially in love with him. HE'S AMAZING IN TWILIGHT!!! AHHH! Anywho, I would love to read Angel. I can't guarentee it'll be soon. I'm really busy and whatnot. But I will definitely DEFINITELY check it out and leave a review. thanks again. -Shea Report Review
lol! get some coffee...its funny when youre hyper! gr8 story. tootles xAuthor's Response: lol, I do love my coffee! thanks for the review! :P Report Review
Coffee rocks! Yes, I said rocks. Rocks rock too. I prefer rock. I like (prepare for LONG list) Fall Out Boy, My Chemical Romance, Scouting For Girls, The Fray, The Feeling, Kate Nash, Linkin Park, The Hoosiers, The Killers, Maroon 5 and the Keiser Cheifs. And lots more but I can't be bothered to write them down. I also like pet rocks... P.S. I learn German, not Spanish but I did know what that ment. Anyway - English: Bye German: Auf Wiedersehn Italian: Ciao French: Au Revoir Spanish: Adios (And from the films; Astah Lavista, Baby!)Author's Response: I AGREE!!! COFFEE TOTALLY ROCKS!!! (sips my annual afternoon cup) I usually drink at least like ten cups a day. it's insane really. And My Chemical Romance OWN ALL!!! I LOVE THEM!!! MCR FOB and panic at the disco are probably my fave bands of all time. :) :) :) :) Have a nice day. Report Review
i just love this fic. it is definitely one of my favourites! it's so entertaining to read. i am very much a james/lily reader, so i LOVE it. i can really imagine this story in my head. Great job!! 10/10Author's Response: Thanks. i'm really glad you liked it. :) :) :) -Shea Report Review
omg, that was damn nice (: your writing rocks!Author's Response: thanks so much! Report Review
Oh my goshhh, this was so cute. i love how u made james like really into muggle movies. that was nice.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate the support and the fact that you like my writing! :) :) :) Report Review
Aww, that was sweet! Great ending! 10/10!! Her hero... Sweet.Author's Response: :) Thanks again. I'm glad you liked my story! :) :) :) Report Review
Well, here's a review, but only because you said the magic word...por favor, of course! This is a good story. THe part where James protected Lily like that was amazing! Great job! Amos is so mean...Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much... I mean gracias! (sp?) LOL!!! :) :) :) Report Review
It was awesome. Nice ending. Just next time maybe make your story more detailed and longer? But good job anyway. =DAuthor's Response: XD Report Review
It was awesome. Nice ending. Just next time maybe make your story more detailed and longer? But good job anyway. =DAuthor's Response: Awww, thank you. :) Yeah, I agree that it was short, but I started to lose inspiration for it, so I rushed it. Thanks for you support! Report Review
its a little bit outthere that they all freak out about the head badge thing, McGonagall is a little bit out of character to be that upset about it. but otherwise its good!Author's Response: LOL! This entire story is kinda out there! Yeah, she's really OOC in this fic... But I kinda need it like that for the story to work! LOL! thanks for taking the time to review! :) I really appreciate it! -Shea Report Review
Oooh. this is interesting. i love how Lily is afraid of Spiders. Gives james and lils some excuse for cuddling. just kidding. this is really good. I was laughing, really. another cute chapterAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad to have so much support from reviewers like you! Report Review
AWWWAuthor's Response: Thanks. Report Review
This is so cute. I love how you made James a little bit cocky still but really maturing noticeably. I hope the rest of the story is as sweet as this. If you have time check out my story. its a james lily fic too. btw - i still really like your story and will read more of itAuthor's Response: LOL! I'm really glad you like my story!!! :) :) :) Thanks so much for the awesome review! AND I WILL TOTALLY CHECK OUT YOUR FIC!!! I love checking out others' stuff. :) Thanks so much again. And I'm super happy that you're gonna be reading more of my fic! YAY!!! -Shea Report Review
fantastico' good jobAuthor's Response: OOOH! You used spanish (I think... I should really start studying, LOL!) Thanks for the review! -Shea Report Review
Hola. THis is Reese and Julia. Julia, you already reviewed this chapter. Go away. j/k. Oh, thanks, Reese, you're real nice aren't you? Don't answer, you'll just LIE! Thx. Anyway, this was pretty sweet. I like how Lily goes out w/ Diggory and James is all jealous. I love when people write about guys fighting over girls. Julia is evil. Yeah, I am. I'm weird. HAHA! Reese and JuliaAuthor's Response: wow that's confusing! Thanks for the review! I LOVE BOTH OF YOU! LOL! :) :) :) Have a fabulous Halloween guys! -Shea Report Review
it was awesome, i really liked it very cute!Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) -Shea Report Review
im so so so so so so sorry for the super late review. i read this a while ago, but my then i couldnt find time to write a review. im so sorry. :[ anyway, ROFL!! HAHA THIS WAS AWESOME! are you kidding me?! that was amazing writing! you dont know how many times i started cracking up while reading this. infact, everytime i saw peters name i started to hyperventilate. HAHAHAHAHA he stole her dirty underwear?! LOL! and omg this part- “And you thought we’d forgotten about that little confession at the concert.” Remus guffawed." ROFL. HAHAHA. this was one of the most amazing stories ever. i cant believe its the ending. :[ this was the most hilarious story i have ever read ever ever ever. :[ im wicked sad its over. i looked forward to finding updates and reading about silly peters mistakes. haha. you have such a flair for writing. you have an awesome talent and an amazing sense of humor. you should write a joke book all about the marauders. seriously, every kid on this planet'll like wet their pants just reading the first page. fantastic job! awesome fic! im so gonna reccomend this to people. it rocks. :] xx nora. Author's Response: Thank you SO much. I loved all the support I've gotten from you throughout this fic. I LOVE YOU! LOL! :) :P I'm glad you liked my attempt at humor. Apparently most people think I'm funny, including you... but I don't really see how I'm really funny. :P Oh well. WOW!!! I'm so blushing right now. You are the BEST reviewer ever. And you totally deserve a huge ginormous award. Thank you so much. Really, you don't know how fabulous your review is. You're the greatest. :) -Shea Report Review
Okay, this isn't right. I know I left a review for this story. But it wasn't there anymore! Oh, well, I'll just write it again! 10/10 for the chapter and the story. Ew, he stole her underwear? While it was dirty? Can't blame them for not letting him come! That's gross! But oddly funny. It was so funny. I love your sense of humor! Aren't you sad it's over? When my one story ended, I almost cried. When I wrote it and when I posted it. But I'm over it now. Sorry! Don't have much time. But it was great! Gotta run! Bye!Author's Response: yeah, I got your last review and responded too... Whatever, maybe it was too conversational... we both did get sidetracked A LOT! LOL! Thank for another review! :) I'm not all that sad because I wasn't that attached to it. -Shea Report Review
Aw!!! HOW SWEET!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! And the descriptions are yet again BRILLIANT!!! And, that last sentence is BRILLIANT!!! It sums EVERYTHING up, AND it includes the title!!! Awesome! THIS STORY IS SO AMAZING SUPER AMAZING AND AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!! A gazillion out of ten!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :DAuthor's Response: Wow, I'm glad you liked this so much... *blushes* It's reviews like these that I live for! :) Thanks so much, you're such a sweetie! :) -Shea Report Review
Hey Shea, Totally awesome. I've always been a HUGE Marauder's Map fan! And I hate spiders, too...but usually I just step on 'em. Whatever. 10/10! (as usual!) Love ya, ReeseAuthor's Response: Thank you. :) :) :) I'm glad you liked it! :) i'm scared to death of spiders. Ya know those itty bitty ones??? Yeah, I won't kill them because I think that they'll eat me. -Shea Report Review
I don't know if the part about Lily screaming was suppose to be funny, but that was the funniest part for me.Author's Response: LOL! Thanks, I'm glad you appreciate my humor! :) :) :) Report Review
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