{reviewid: 2598021, reviewer: 'Dmlong'}
3rd October 2011:
Great story! Cant wait to read more of your stuff. :)
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{reviewid: 2325666, reviewer: 'a%20rollerball'}
4th April 2010:
great story please write more :) x
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{reviewid: 2186964, reviewer: 'writergirl8'}
8th August 2009:
This was so cute! I'm looking foward to reading the one-shots. Thanks for writing! ~writergirl8
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{reviewid: 2186963, reviewer: 'writergirl8'}
8th August 2009:
Oh the baby shower was so much fun! But how are Ron and Hermione ever going to agree on a name. they're so adorable together, the way you're portraying their relationship is cute! ~writergirl8
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{reviewid: 2186958, reviewer: 'writergirl8'}
8th August 2009:
Ooooh, I'm so excited for the baby shower! Ginny rocks, and it's so wonderful to go through this experience with Hermione and Ron. Ron is so excited, it's so funny! ~writergirl8
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{reviewid: 2186952, reviewer: 'writergirl8'}
8th August 2009:
oh, no, that's terrible. Completely different reactions from the parents... but, goodness, if i got pregnant no matter how old I was I'd really want my mum there for me. I hope Mrs. Granger comes through! ~writergirl8
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{reviewid: 2186460, reviewer: 'writergirl8'}
7th August 2009:
OMG! Mrs. Wealsey's reaction was awesome! I loved it! It was just so perfect! And, let me tell you, my stomach was clenched nervously the whole time as well, so that is a mark of a very well written story. 10.10 on the chapter, and the part where Ron is loosening his shirt collar is perfect. Loved it! ~writergirl8
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{reviewid: 2186459, reviewer: 'writergirl8'}
7th August 2009:
This was cute! You know a lot about pregnancys, it was actually quite informative for me! The part with Hermione undressing was adorable, I really enjoyed reading it. I was blushing right along with those two! (Well, not really, just laughing so hard my face was red ^^) ~writergirl8
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{reviewid: 2186458, reviewer: 'writergirl8'}
7th August 2009:
This was a good chapter, and I liked how Ron found out about the baby- I sort of figured something like that would happen. The end was a bit confusing, though. I couldn't tell who was talking. ~writergirl8
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{reviewid: 2186457, reviewer: 'writergirl8'}
7th August 2009:
Oh gosh poor Hermione! Even nail polish... then again that scent will revolt anyone. I guess the pregnancy just pushed her over the edge. I like how you're making Ron, he's very in character, and the nickname is cute. I hope he's okay with it when he finds out! ~writergirl8
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{reviewid: 2186455, reviewer: 'writergirl8'}
7th August 2009:
Oh, this is great. I really like it so far. I think you did the beginning very well, and I also liked how you made this a sort of filler chapter to tell everyone what's going on and to set the story, but also made her find out about the pregnancy.
10/10 ~writergirl8
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{reviewid: 2151693, reviewer: 'Christine'}
28th June 2009:
Better than good, really good! I love this story!
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{reviewid: 2109330, reviewer: 'Daphne%2013'}
1st May 2009:
Love it!! Very cute and nice!! ;)
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{reviewid: 2103094, reviewer: 'MichelleHart'}
22nd April 2009:
Good ending although it was a little short.
I wish Hermione and her Mom had made up before the baby came but I not.
Are you actually going to post some of those one-shots? I'd love to read them!
This story is defiantly a favourite!
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{reviewid: 2103091, reviewer: 'MichelleHart'}
22nd April 2009:
Great shower! She got so many gifts!
And I think Delaney is a great name! It's really original!
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{reviewid: 2103088, reviewer: 'MichelleHart'}
22nd April 2009:
"I can't see my feet anymore!" haha that made me laugh so hard!
And it's going to be a girl!! Yay!! I was hoping for that!!
:D
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{reviewid: 2103086, reviewer: 'MichelleHart'}
22nd April 2009:
I really glad that Hermione will be able to still get her schooling done since that is so important for her.
I can't believe her mother would get so angry at her!! I mean how could she ever treat her daughter that way..
I hope they are able to resolve it...
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{reviewid: 2103085, reviewer: 'MichelleHart'}
22nd April 2009:
Once again, Ron is the sweetest man alive!!!
I'm glad Molly and Arthur didn't freak out about Hermione being pregnant! :)
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{reviewid: 2103082, reviewer: 'MichelleHart'}
22nd April 2009:
Ron is so sweet.
I'm glad he went with her, it's important that they're both involved.
Excellent job!
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{reviewid: 2102790, reviewer: 'MichelleHart'}
22nd April 2009:
That chapter had me welling up with tears!!
I feel so bad for them, they're so young :(
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{reviewid: 2102783, reviewer: 'MichelleHart'}
22nd April 2009:
Great chapter!
I can't wait until Hermione tells Ron...
By the way, I love how you write...it seems so personal, sort of like you're reading from Hermione's journal. Very creative! :)
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{reviewid: 2102776, reviewer: 'MichelleHart'}
21st April 2009:
Good first chapter.
This is going to get interesting...
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{reviewid: 2053309, reviewer: 'mcnall'}
11th February 2009:
the last chapter seems really forced it is a shame because the story as a whole seemed good
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{reviewid: 1998973, reviewer: 'Snapelover124'}
30th November 2008:
The hole story was good.
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{reviewid: 1975735, reviewer: 'HannahGranger'}
27th October 2008:
another great chapter! keep up the good work
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