i love it it is enticiing you to read more

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Short and sweet first chapter. I like it so far...but if there is dancing in it then I'm sure to like it. Your desciption of Hermione's change in appearance reminds me so much of myself this year. I have finally managed to tame my crazy hair as well.

Great work.

Author's Response: thank you very much! enjoy the rest!

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great but how did draco know to sit with her when she didnt talk

Author's Response: he is intuitive...

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Just so you know Hungry Eyes isn't the song that Baby and Johnny Make Love to, it's the song that Johnny is teaching Baby the second part of the dance routine. But good job!

~Friendmaker1000

Author's Response: oh wow, I wondered if I'd gotten that wrong...haha. Thanks!

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Well personally, I think that it's awesome. Odd, sure, but seriously awesome.

Author's Response: merci beaucoup.i love it

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=] I'm thinkin' me likes s'far. Though WHAT is going through Hermione's head, is way beyond my level of knowledge.

Author's Response: haha...yeah. I enjoyed writing this story... alot

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I like how you made dr. susse a wizard, but you took things to fast. draco and hermione should not be freinds in the second chapter,and ron should not DIE! Plus how did draco know how to dance? why is he a tratior? am i missing a story?

Author's Response: i left most of it to just back story. I figured Narcissa would have made him take Ballroom, and of course he is a traitor...have you read the 6th book?haha. this is not my best work, but thanks for the input!

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OK...?

That was kinda sudden.. I didn't think Hermione would just accept Draco that easily and then make love to him?

Author's Response: basically, i just wanted to get to the couple stuff....i think since it's ooc i have a right to screw with their personalities. thanks for the review

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YOUR STORY IS FABULOUS!
IT IS NOW ONE OF MY FAVORITE DRAMIONE'S
KEEP WRITING...PLZ?

Author's Response: thank you...i am prolly gonna write a sequel....not dramione though....check out my staories i have a couple dramione one-shots

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i love it :D i also love how the kids have greek gods as their second names, nice touch :D:D:D good work really :)

Author's Response: thank yu very much...

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I'm sorry, but I can't read any further. It's really terrible. The writing, the kiss scene, everything. You need to slow down, and really make it a good story.

Author's Response: you don;t have to read further....a lot of people like it. i'm sorry you can't see the good parts

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wow the whole story was immense I loved it 10/10 =]

Author's Response: thank you! now go read the first chapter of the sequel!!! teehee, thanks

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The title should be "She's Bringing SexY Back". *giggle* It's kinda obvious.

Ya, you rushed it way too quickly

6/10
kbav

Author's Response: any suggestions to fix it...you seem quick to critique but offer no way to help....

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Eh, decent, not the best.

I like the little bits and pieces you've added in, just not HOW you added them. I love Yurtle!

This Draco/Hermione is too easy! Needs more fire!

8/10
kbav

Author's Response: i write it how i see it....they can;t all be fight filled...ya know?

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Bit cliche, but alright. Draco seems too nice, sorry.

8/10

Author's Response: characters change....i write him so vindictive...i decided to change it up a bit

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haha I love the name of this chapter.

Author's Response: teehee....i do too!!! haha....i enjoyed this chapter!

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I like it. It's sweet and simple. My only complaint is the length lol.

Author's Response: srry, they do get much longer!!!

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Interesting... Grabbed me but its strange... I can't put my finger on it. Theres something different about this story... I don't know. It just kind of grabbed me in an unexpected way... well! have a nice day.

Author's Response: thanks....i enjoy strange!! haha....thanks for reading!!

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Great ending! 1 question though, you didnt mention wheter they kept dancing or not...

Author's Response: it wasn;t exactly important...i mite do a sequel....ya know...touch on the kids journeys through Hogwarts....they do keep dancing tho...

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i thought it was one billion, anywho.good job:)

Author's Response: yeah...i have a continuation problem....i'll go look at that...:) thanks

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i love when you write about the dancing; very real!!!

Author's Response: thanks!!!! i try...i haven't danced in a million years....but it was my first love....so...:)

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yay! harry's back!... i love that green -eyed boy!

Author's Response: ME TOO!!!! haha

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i loved the line when draco called her 'mother theresa'...v. funny :)

Author's Response: teehee, yes...my friend called me that and i drew amazing nicknames from that...thanks

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i'm confused :S.maybe its becuase i'm VERY sleep deprived and CANNOT stop reading :)

Author's Response: haha, i hate that! i do that constantly!! I tend to confuse...but you just have to read between the lines!

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wow...that was pretty random...but intriguin ;)

Author's Response: thanks you...randomize is the way my life is...i write stories like that too!! teehee...thanks for the review

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