That was great! I loved it! Athough, it was hard getting use to idea that Malfoy loved Hermione, and I think if he loved her as much as he said he did, he would have been able fight through the mind control. And I was hard getting use to Ron being dead, but I loved that he was able to come back and see them. Great work!

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well anyone who can kill off a main charcter espcially one of the golden trio has to have balls well done!!!

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aww! poor ron! he died! lol i'm guessing this will lead to some serious chemistry hey

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I love this story I really do I am a massive H/HR fan.

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NO! I CAN'T BELEIVE YOU KILLED DRACO! AND HERMIONE ENDED UP WITH HARRY! THAT"S NOT FAIR!

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TEE HEE
I love it!!

10

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love it love it love it
major event coming up
obviously
eep!!
*Jumps up and down with excitement*

10

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very nice but very weird plotline

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Ok u said to reveiw so here it is! I think ur a great author but it don't really sound like a Harry Potter storie anymore so mayb u could add a bit more action? Anyway i jus want to say i hope u'll finish this storie soon i can't wait 4 the ending!

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Awesome.. that was brilliantly done! Ur a great writer :-D!!!

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That was an improvement, even though it was kind of random. By the way, what is a Fralagi?! And why could Harrymoce when time was frozen just because he was holding Hermione's hand?!

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Why would sensible, clever Hermione even let the thought of staying with Draco even pass her mind after what he did to her?! There is a guy who obviously likes her alot and she definitely likes hime, so what is the problem?! Her old boyfriend acted completely terrible to her, and in most cases in the Muggle world would have gone to prison, or at least therapy! What is going on here?!

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Why was Mrs. Malfoy being all kind and sweet to Draco?! In the fourth book she acted all cold and like she did not care about anyone but herself! You made her act like Mrs. Weasly!!!!!!!!!!!! And Also, noe that Voldemort has more able-bodied servants, do you really think that he would trust Wormtail with such an important part of his plan?!

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That really confused me! First Pansy was all, no I have to save her1 The next minute she was like, Like I would ever help her! Please explain this to me!

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I am so confused! First you make Hermione and Harry do what they did and then Hermione turns right around and do what she did with Draco. This is Hermione that you are writing about! Please keep in mid that she is sensible and smart!

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I only just skimmed that one and knew that I did not want to read the whole thing. You said that you are 13, right? What are you doing writing what you consider "R"?! you can show passion without going all the way to R! If you consider it to be R, than you should have enough common sense to not write about it!

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I know that all of my reviews are not complimenting ones, but excuse me?! What do you mean "Hermione wouldn't lie to him"?! She has been lying to him for almost a whole year! And that "tight-fitting tee" part was alittle confusing. I mean, really, we are talking about Hermione here!

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That wa interesting. Why in the world was Hermione, sensible, smart Hermione, trying to figure out which guy was a better kisser?!!!! And also, why would Hermione ever go to Draco's dormitory ALONE with him?! Hermione would never do either of those things!!!!!!!!

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That was nice. I still do not like the whole Hermione Draco thing. It really bugs me. I also think that Hermione is being unfair and that she should just make up her mind to be with either Harry or Draco. What she is doing is totally uncharacteristic of her and it is really bugging me.

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That was nice, but where did you get these ideas?! Hermione was always the calm, sensible, clever one. In your stroy she has Frenched two different guys in one day!!!!!!!!!!! I do not think that Hermione would ever go out with Draco, or that he would ever want to go out with her. Why was he Frenching her, picking her up, telling her sweet things, and asking herout?! Also, why did she where a dress instead of robes?

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THat was nice, however, the characters that you wrote were totally different from the ones that J.K.R. wrote. Do you really think that Hermione would call hreself an "ass-kicker"?! She probab;y would not agree to go and meet Malfoy by the lake, much less let him kiss her?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also, Hermione and Harry did not seem tp have a problem when Harry kissed Hermione, so why should they have a problem with hugging?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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That was really sad! I really like the character Ron and think that the series is not the same without him. Also, that was kind of an abrupt change in style for Hermione. Do you really think that she would do that in the books?

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i love this story its amazing i even cried! u should keep writing more ur a fantastic writer!

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You killed Ron... *gasp* It was a great chapter though!

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OMG im sry i didnt revew a while ago but i wanted to wait untill the end of the whole fan fic it was amazing!! nice job(and sry about ur cheerleading accident) please think about writing another h/h fan fic but i will deffinently read Purple Rose again it was great and thank you for keeping my occupied while i was supposed to be doing bio homework {hehe ;)}

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