Hey, Lex. I don't know when you last updated this, but I just finished it. I started reading it when you started posting it, but I just re-read the whole thing. I give it a 10/10. I am very curious as to how this is going to go from here. I like Avedis, for a bad guy. Lol. But you can PM me or something whenever you want. My screen name is hpfanatic2010. I really enjoyed this and am looking forward to the next chapter of it being uploaded onto here! :D Report Review
Oh... me likey! very fun
please, update soon!!
-NYMphieAuthor's Response: Thanks! :D I'm glad you like the chapter and thanks for leaving a review! Report Review
This is an amazing story so far. I love the way in which you've shaped this story, and I love the host of characters and vivid imagery that you've applied. This is a truly beautiful story and I've really enjoyed reading this. It's a very creative and interesting idea. Wonderful job. :D I can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks! I really do need to get the next chapter posted. I have the chapters written all the way up to eighteen and it's been that way for nearly a year now :/ (I'm having some serious writer's block!) But, thankyou for your wonderfully amazing review and the next chapter should be in queue soon. Report Review
please keep writing im hooked!!!Author's Response: :D Thanks, I'm glad you like it. Report Review
You updated!!! *squeals loudly while jumping and clapping her hands around the room madly* You did a lurvly job with the whole thing. Vocab, detail, and all that good stuff. Can't wait for more! 10/10Author's Response: :D Thanks! I'm so sorry you had to wait so long...:( I'll have the next chapter up as soon as humanly possible! Report Review
I can't wait for more explainations.
~ LeahAuthor's Response: :D Thanks for the review!
Please continue 10/10 so far. i really love your story! please keep it up!Author's Response: I will, don't worry! Next chapter will hopefully be up soon... hopefully! Report Review
AWSOMEAuthor's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Oh...What was that about??? Poor Sydie, poor girl. I wish Draco would treat her better.
~ LeahAuthor's Response: I know. Sometimes I really hate writting Malfoy like that... I mean I hate his guts, but if he was to live in the end and have children I do hope JKR plans for him to 'go good' or something. It's sad that Sydie doesn't have a loving family like the other three. And, though I won't ever explain it in the books (because it's kind of a wide story that doesn't really matter) my little sister and I decided that in the end of this generation Sydie's brother can turn good! Converting the Malfoy name to Gryffindor forever and ever!!! No, that probably won't even fit with the story... thanks for the review! ^-^ Report Review
Yay! You updated! That was brilliant, I can't wait for the next chapter! Hurry and update please! Oh yeah, right... and a 10/10 to you!Author's Response: :D That you! I thought I wouldn't get anymore reviews for this chapter. I hope to update soon. Thanks for your review! ^_^ Report Review
Oh My!!! I telling you your writing is getting better as you go!! I can't wait to read more!!Author's Response: :D Thank you soo much! I'm hoping to have the next chapter up soon. Thank again for the wonderful review! Report Review
It was a really good chapter, but something was wrong:
Harry was only a parselmouth beacuse Voldemort was. When Voldemort transferred his powers to Harry, he became one. Harry's daughter would not be a parseltounge. Also, Harry hated being a parseltounge, so Irene wouldn't want to write, would she?
And, Dark Wizards (or witches) are parseltounge.
Sorry for soundingAuthor's Response: Thats alright. I've had review like this before saying Kaylee couldn't be a metamorphmagus becaus it's not passed on by blood. Even if i seems impossible for Irene to be parsletongue... she has to be. Besides, it's in Harry's blood, so it can be in hers... Yeah, it does seem wierd how she would write to harry about it [in it] but then it is fanfiction and there is a point behind it all. It comes out later. Thanks for stating your opinion, even though, at the time, I can't do much about it. Report Review
WHO IS "SHE"? you have to have a name! I love it
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry. I never realised I wrote it that way. It annoys me when other's do that in their stories...and then I do it in mine. I'll try to go through and correct all of those this weekend...Thanks for telling me. Oh, and I'm glad you like my story. I hope you like the other chapters as well. Report Review
I'm glad that all of them are safe. So are they the power?Author's Response: ^_^ Report Review
AWWW POOR SYDIE* sobs* why do you have to be mean to her? Oh and when will we find out her power? Please say soon!!Author's Response: :( I know... I hate being mean to Sydie...but, well, her life can't be perfect (especially with the plotline). Oh, and yes, you will find out about Sydie's power 'very' soon. Thanks for the review and I'm glad you've liked it so far! :D Report Review
Aww poor Sydie..Author's Response: :( yes... poor Sydie... Thank you for the review! Report Review
Okay please excuse the stupidity but who if Aunt Eli? I dont remember ever hearing about her before.Author's Response: I'm sorry...I've had several people get confused with her. I'll try to go back and clarify it all. I guess it just made sense to me because she was always in my ideas... Anyways, Eli, or Elizabeth, is Charlie's wife. I'm sorry I've never explained that before. Report Review
I feel so bad for Sydie. I bet the four with power are Sydie, Lana, Kaylee, and Irene. Irene had Slythrine speak to her because she's parsletougue, Kaylee will have Huffulpuff speak to her because she's metamorphous, Lana is brillent, and Sydie has a special power. Right? Can Sydie see the future? 10/10 please update soon.Author's Response: :D Thanks for the review!!! I've had many people guess the same exact thing...but I can't tell you if you're right or not...it would ruin the surprise (like their ever was one...) Thanks again for the review and I'm glad you like the story so far^_^ Report Review
omg u put a malfoy in gryffindor?!?! YAY FILTCH IS DEAD, now what happened to mrs norris (did someone kick her so hard she died??)Author's Response: I did put a Malfoy in Gryffindor....And I agree...all Filtch ever was was annoying. I never really thought of what happened to Mrs. Norris but I like your idea! Thanks for the review and I hope you've liked the story so far. Report Review
Awwwwwwww! Poor Sydie! She should write a letter to one of the others and get them to bring her to their house. Ya know, Sydie kinda reminds me of Harry when he was at the Durselys house. Anyways, WOW! That whole train encounter, you put that superbly! I couldn't have done it better myself. How did Lana know that only simple spells would work? Why couldn't Sydie let go of the wand? Great job! I'll give you a 100,000,000,000,000,000/10 for the wonderful work!Author's Response: Oh, thank you so so so much! I love your reviews. Yes, I hate having to make Sydie's life quite-a-bit-less-perfect than the other three but it is important for the story line. Thank you again sooo much and I promise your questions will be answered in later chapters. Report Review
i h8 u! i h8 u so much! (no offense its bcuz of the cliffie) omg that wuz a rally good chappie, and update soon! 9, would b 10 but u know...i doint like cliffies....lolAuthor's Response: :D I'm sorry... Normally I don't like cliff hangers either, but I wanted to give it a try. Hopefully I can submit the next chapter later today. Thanks for reading and reviewing! ^_^ ~Lexi Report Review
Oh, what's going to happen?!?!?!?! Really well put, I felt like I was right in with the action. Wonderful job at keeping everyone in character, and superb action! 100,000,000,000,000,000/10
@.@Author's Response: Wow! Thank you soo much! Do you really enjoy it that much!?! I love reviews like this [even if sometimes they are lies] Thanks for the review! Report Review
wow... trouble... and why am i not surprised that James is interested in a girl with read hair: “Hi, Irene,” James responded less enthusiastically. He glanced at the other person in the compartment. She had DARK RED HAIR that was pulled back into a loose ponytail. She smiled at the four and her green-hazel eyes sparkled.
haha... what is it with Potter men and red-heads?
anyway... this chapter was awsomne as usual!
have a mentioned that i absolutely AH-DORE you banner! mine was made by Sun SationGal07 as well. could you check out my one-shot? thnx. please read it and review it
10/10 for this one! keep em comin! (another way of saying - update soon!)
Author's Response: :D Thank you so much for the review! Yes...those poor cursed Potter men. Even though it is a bit cliche I've always imagined every Potter marrying a red-head. Oh, and SunSation Gal 01 is amazing! I will try to update as soon as possible. Thanks again for the review. Report Review
Awww, I love Sydie. *huggles* Poor little rejected Malfoy that she is.
Power of the Founders, eh? Sounds interesting, to say the least. Wonder what Sydie and Lana's powers are. Oh, oh!! Can I guess who has what founder's power? I have no idea what the powers are, but I know who has what founder. I think. Yeah.
Sorry, random mood. And another long review. Yay! lolAuthor's Response: :) I'm glad you like my story. Feel free to make any assuptions or ask any questions you want to, I might even answer som eof them... And I like long reviews so... thanks for the review!!! Report Review
sorry 2 be a pain but could ya ask her who she is if it's not 2 much trouble?
i would ask her myself but i can't leave a question on her review thingy cause ya have 2 be logged on & i don't have an account........Author's Response: No Problem. If you don't mind me asking...why?
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