That-- that was wonderfully written :D
I might have cried-- just a bit.
10/10 :)Author's Response: Aww, yay! I'm glad you liked it! :D Report Review
Sniff... Sniff... But that was so sweet. And I guess Hermione's words are right, he does live in Hermione and Harry, just like James and Lily live in Harry...
Who do you think will die in Deadly Hollows? Ron?
P.S. (Writer of History)
I guess your right. Magic must take a lot of power and perhaps one day we will create machines powerful enough to defeat your magic.
But get this. The whole (magic) world will never unite together to defeat us muggles; and you know why, over half of the world think your crazy. They do not believe in you or your ways. They want to gone, and there are some very strong people against you. I have faith in them.
And don't you know, that love is more powerful than you think? But of course, you think love makes you weak. Then how did Harry live? It's because his mother died for him. That's why.
Please, it isn't possible to wipe out all muggles and muggle-borns. There are simply too many. And who says muggle-borns are weaker, I think they are as strong, and in some cases stronger. Yup, stronger.
Lastly, there are so few purebloods left. Probably only a few thousand families. They will one day have to marry those close to them. Remember all purebloods are already connected by marriage or blood. Pretty soon, it would be a even closer link. And someone (I don't remember) said that if they didn't marry muggles, the entire wizarding population would have died out already... so there!
P.P.S. So sorry, it's just fun to argue with Voldie. Author's Response: Thank you, and I think Harry will die.
I've little patience for ignorance, girl. Lily Potter was little but a pawn in Dumbledore's tactic against me. It worked, save for the fact that I'm smarter than that old fool. There's no such thing as love, only power.
You're more fool than I thought if you thought I ever claimed Mudbloods as weak, I called them dangerous. Loyal to their roots, I said.
And you, who are not of any respectiable blood, know nothing of the wizarding world outside of the UNITED KINGDOM obviously don't know of the surplus of wizards and witches, pureblooded ones, that exist in countries that have long since embraced purebloodedness. A few thousand families is plenty enough to create a pure race without causing problems of inbreeding. Study genetics, it's in your roots, after all.
(By that time, he would have already killed you...but he's clever, and mad, and evil. You can't change his mind, he's older and wiser than you. ;) ) Report Review
Awww...*tears up* Ron's one of my favorites and this story was so wonderfully bittersweet. Fantastic job!
LMWAuthor's Response: thanks! Report Review
that was sweet, but it moved kinda fast Author's Response: that it did...but thank you! Report Review
WOW< WOW< WOW< WOW that was a real tearjerker, I mean wow, amazing, fantastic.I need a new word for your stories.
Okay until I find a better way to express my awe after reading your stories.which I just begun reading(that's why my reviews are so much later than everyone elses) I will respond much like this, but eventually I will find a way to say.that was amazing
10/10 as always Author's Response: I find wow to be an excellent word. :D I'm so glad that you love my stories this much. :) Report Review
Awww... I LOVE ronniekins though!
Author's Response: i know, i know...i'm just...not a huge Ginny, Percy, or Ron fan... Report Review
Wow that was really good!!! Too short though.Author's Response: I'm sorry you thought it was too short, but I am glad that you liked it. ;) Report Review
This story is amazing, it's got a brilliant title and it's really touching, I think it would help anyone who had lost a loved one! it'd definately going in my favourite! Carry on your brilliant work! Author's Response: Thank you very much! :-D Report Review
Beautifully done. The last line was very powerful - and very realistic. Very well done, indeed!! ~JessiAuthor's Response: Thank you! :-) Report Review
that was really sad! but good!Author's Response: thank you very much! Report Review
Hmmm . . . I like the theme and some of the phrases and words are very well put together. It's interesting, I haven't read anys stories where Ron died instead of Harry and it's a very different path to take. I like how you kept it short, because a story like this doesn't really need a lot of detail. For the most part, I liked it.:) Author's Response: Aww, that makes me happy! And....I'm not a huge Ron fan, so (although I do see Harry as a huge possibility in the death factor) if Harry doesn't die, I've always pictured Ron's death as the reason Harry will defeat Voldy. Report Review
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