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Review #1, by raznilla Letters, meetings and a train ride

1st July 2011:
Awesome story! :D I really like your writing style! You portrayed both James and Lily's characters perfectly. James has just the right amount of arrogance and wit!

Just one small typo in this sentence: 'You would deserve every on of them,' stated Remus'

Good job on this, can't wait for another chapter!

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Review #2, by Twinkleflower Letters, meetings and a train ride

29th May 2006:
This is a reallt good start to your fic. I like the descriptions of the Marauders and Lily and her friends. I think how Lily and James behave towards each other is very well written. I think there may have been one or two typing errors but no more than that. Overall a brilliant chapter and I look forward to the next one. Twinkleflower ;oD

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