Awesome story! :D I really like your writing style! You portrayed both James and Lily's characters perfectly. James has just the right amount of arrogance and wit! Just one small typo in this sentence: 'You would deserve every on of them,' stated Remus' Good job on this, can't wait for another chapter! Report Review
This is a reallt good start to your fic. I like the descriptions of the Marauders and Lily and her friends. I think how Lily and James behave towards each other is very well written. I think there may have been one or two typing errors but no more than that. Overall a brilliant chapter and I look forward to the next one. Twinkleflower ;oD Report Review
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