post soon!! i want to know what happens!!Author's Response: I'm updating as fast as possible, but thatnsk for the nudge! Report Review
wait...i thought remus and sirius made the floors disappear...i'm confused...Author's Response: Sorry that it's confusing you! Everything will be explained tho, I promise. Report Review
aww! that is so sweet of lily to do that for james!Author's Response: :) Report Review
well, that is a relief! i was very mad at lily when she yelled her heart out at james. but at least they are friends!Author's Response: This story is all about emotions, particularly changing emotions. Thanks for the comment! Report Review
That was funny. UPDATE SOONER THIS TIME!
10/10Author's Response: Thanks again for the kind reviews. I'm so sorry this updating is taking me so long =) Report Review
WHAT!?!?!?! THE INJUSTICE OF IT ALL! I loved it! Keep up the fantasic work!
10/10Author's Response: Good to hear you still love this story! Report Review
nice. Loved it. keep up the great work!
10/10Author's Response: Thanks again. Report Review
I loved it. Now I'm waiting for Lily to blow up from James saying that. Oh well. I did love it. Keep up the excellent work!
10/10Author's Response: My work is beginning to seem a little bit predictable. Hmm. Report Review
HA! I loved it! Keep up the excellent work, and don't ever stop!
10/10Author's Response: I definately won't stop writing, as long as there are still people who will read it all! Report Review
I liked it. keep up the great work!!!
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Well, actually a basilisks look can kill. anyway. I have three stories posted, and another being validated, they're not done, well, the One-Shot is, bu the others aren't. Maybe you could check them out? kewl. I loved the chapter!!! Keep up the great work!!
10/10Author's Response: Well, I'll definately check out your one shot,a dn when the others are validated I'll have a look! Report Review
I loved it! keep up the great work!!!
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I loved it. Keep up the great work!!!
10/10Author's Response: Wow. You finishe readin one story and then on to the next. I'm so happy! Report Review
Have I told you how dang much i love this story? it is so adorable! hey check out my story. I have a new one coming up to that i think you will enjoy! keep writing, your very good.
*NOELLE*10/10Author's Response: I'll check out your story asap, for sure. I'm also very glad you like this story, it's so much fun to write! Report Review
absolutely fantabulous! I LOVE THIS STORY, UPDATE RIGHT NOW!Author's Response: You've made me smile now. I' really glad you're enjoying this story. I'll try and update soon. Report Review
I'm confused as to why they have detention, but other than that, it's a great story and great chapter! Udate soon!Author's Response: I;'ll explain. McGonagall thought that they were behind the 'disappearing floor' episode. Hope you understand now and thanks for the continuing support! Report Review
This is an awesome story so far!! Good job! I will definitely go on to read more, but before I do, I just have one little problem. James was always excellent at Transfiguration, Lily not so much. It seems to me, then, Lily would be the one needing the help, not James. But, it is your story, so, you can take it any-which-way you like. Again, though, it is a very nice story that you have going! There's one more chapter, I believe so...I'm off to read it, then! Good job! :) 9/10Author's Response: Oh. Hmm. good point about who is good at transfiguration. I never thought of that. Thanks. I don't think I'll change it, but I might make a note at the end and explain it. Thanks again for your comments. Always great. Report Review
Nice. Just read all of the chapters, and it's pretty good ^.^ Keep up the good work! -Pat-Author's Response: Thanks!! It's nice to hear that you've read all of it at once. I should do that when I get time ...
hurry!Author's Response: i already feel guilty as it is! I'm really busy but a chappie should be up soon! Report Review
this is an awesome story and i would love to read moreAuthor's Response: thanks, I'm writing more, don't worry
it's so sweet i luv itAuthor's Response: Thanks ;)
HURRY PLZ!!!!!!!! I NEED STORY TO LIVE!!!!!
;)Author's Response: Nice to hear from u again. I'm updating asap I promise!! Report Review
Sorry for the second slightly negative review today, but why is Dippet still headmaster? He was headmaster when Voldemort went to Hogwarts, but as far as I know Dumbledore was already headmaster when Lupin went to school (with his "condition" this probably wasn't exactly easy) and he arranged some things for Lupin (shrieking shack & whomping willow). [I just looked it up, it says in PoA that Lupin didn't hope to be allowed at Hogwarts "but then Dumbledore became headmaster"]
Apart from this minor detail the story is very good (although I keep having problems with drinking coffee and reading this; the last time I had such problems was whilest reading "The Worst Day in the History of England"). Anyway, I really like it.Author's Response: Thanks again. I wasn't sure who was Headmaster at the time, so thanks for your comfirmation. I will change it to Dumbledore immediately! ;) Report Review
AAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how could you end it there???????? please update as fast as possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
10/10Author's Response: Sorry for the bad cliffie. You have to admit stopping the story there works well? ;) Updating asap. Report Review
First review? Yay. (I'm cold. I need to go to school in 15 minutes.) James is getting desperate. Haha, hopefully you understand by the boldness and whatnot how I was trying to say that. One thing, wouldn't Dumbledore be Headmaster by that time? I dunno, maybe you just wanted to be different. But I think that Dumbledore would be more likely to have that conversation with James, because Dumbledore knows everything. I love Lily and James stories. They make me happy and want to go hug people. Lmao. Well maybe I better go finish getting ready for school? Keep up with the updates! ♥Heather.Author's Response: I hope you had fun at school! And especially thanks for the lovely review. reading your reviews are always wonderful. I think I know what you mean (from your review). Maybe I will change the headmaster to Dumbledore, it would make more sense. Anyway, glad you liked it! Report Review
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