I love this.u did it so well..n it wasn't silly at all...u've got both luna n goyle down to a t and that's what i've been lookin n lookin for all over this site...absolutely noone seems to know how to capture d eccentricity of luna n wow u really brought out the likelihood of their relationship without compromisin on their characters at all...i've been literally depressed n was ready to howl at the no of marysues i came across especially with luna but sigh!!...u're a lifesaver!a breath of fresh air!it's so hard to come across good writing which is not bein overly melodramatic!Author's Response: Thank you very much :D Report Review
That really made me laugh, the wonderful bumping into each other relationship they had together lol. I think my favourite line was Luna wondering what Harry would look like with wings! Totaly random and therefore Luna!
they are a very odd couple, but I thought you wrote them together well and they were very sweet, I'm a Draco/Luna fanatic myself, but I did enjoy this one shot!
Good job on an extremely unusual pairing!Author's Response: Thanks :) Report Review
that was strange. that is by far the most unusual pairng i've ever read!Author's Response: Lol :) Report Review
Awww i loved this!aw perfecto!!!aww yeh i never wood of guessed them getting together never crossed my mind till i read the description lol and it was quite funny too!Author's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
pretty cool actually!Author's Response: Lol. Thanks! Report Review
very nicea bit of a fluff thoughand not realistno offencexAuthor's Response: It was intended as a bit of fluff so none taken :) Report Review
THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH!!!!! I'M SO GLAD TO FINALLY FIND ANOTHER STORY WHERE GOYLE IS ACTUALLY A GOOD CHARACTER!!!!! I am right now writing my own novel-length fic that includes a Goyle/OC romance (though that is just part of the story). I would suggest you reading it, but it's not posted yet, and I won't be posting it on this site because they'd probably reject it. It's going to be called "The Scarlett Letter". This story wasn't silly; it was VERY IMAGINATIVE!! I love Luna! And the fact that you put her with Goyle makes it even better!! THANK YOU BILLION!!Author's Response: Wow thank you, shame you won't be posting your story on this archive, I'd like to read it! Report Review
I like it, it was very sweet. It was a wierd pairing though.
phix27 is your reader 4ever^_^Author's Response: Lol. Thanks! :) Report Review
Whon says it's silly? I don't. If a Gryffindor could turn his friends in to Voldemort, why couldn't a Slytherin ...
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