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Review #1, by Claire :] Perfection is Overrated

3rd March 2008:
hi jez what evr happened to harry being nice adn sweet. i liked it when it was nice. ahahaha. o well that just means something big is going to happen and then they will fall in love! o good i idea have a Ron and Hermione hook up. i can see it now.anyways! your sooo amaZZZIng. and thanks sooo much for writing that story for me! ive already memorized ive read it over and over sooo many times. well HURRY UP! please. your my hero beacuse of this storyyy! ily.

101/10

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Review #2, by mackid Meeting 'Mione

25th February 2008:
that was really good. and it is getting less confusing than before.


i told you i would read your story!

Author's Response: I still don't understand what's so confusing about it, the twenty other reviews I have on the first chapter don't say it's confusing. :D

I don't remember you saying that you would, but thanks! :D


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Review #3, by mackid Prologue

25th February 2008:
great beginning sort of confusing

Author's Response: How in the world is it confusing? :)

Thanks for the review!


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Review #4, by cassie meadows Perfection is Overrated

15th January 2008:
how depressing! jeez, why? oh, harry is never such a jerk... ever! so i'll have to say your characterization is off... but whatever.

about that necklace... *shakes head* hmph.

malfoy made it in! he and hermione are gonna get together TOTALLY!!! you did a very nice job characterizing malfoy, though...

Author's Response: His characterization is not off, there is a perfectly good explanation why he's acting that way. But if I told you, it would give away the entire story. :D Do you not remember? Well, it was two years ago...

I like my necklace. :D

NO THEY ARE NOT! And you know it. But thanks, I had fun writing Malfoy. :D

Thanks for the review!
Maddi


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Review #5, by AngleOfMercy Perfection is Overrated

5th January 2008:
OMG!what happened to him his act like a
bloody asshole I like it the chapter by the way
up date soon!!!:)!!

Author's Response: Ha ha, thank you! :d You'll find out, I think, in the 19th chapter...

Thanks for the review!


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Review #6, by claire Silence is Golden

3rd October 2007:
ahhh omg i just read like ur newest 3 stries cuz i havent read them in like ever. and they r amazing! ur so awsome. keep them coming@! really plezz do!

Claire!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Claire, I'm glad you liked them! The fifteeth chapter is over halfway done, so it should be coming up soon!

Maddi


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Review #7, by person Just Friends?

16th August 2007:
dude!!!
what the HECK happened to her?!?!?!

Author's Response: Keep reading...

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Review #8, by cassie meadows Silence is Golden

14th August 2007:
ooh la la! are you skipping it... or not?

first of all, i wanna apologize for not reviewing in time... i went camping for the past month and wasn't able to review cuz theres no cell reception or internet connection (lol that rhymed) so... yeah. u can delete my last review if u wanna.

nice disclaimer.

i have to say, the broom scene made my day! i was so happy! i haven't had a lot to laugh about lately...

you did really well this chapter... some parts didnt make sense, so u should reread it, but other than that, it's great.

Author's Response: what do you mean skipping it? i've changed a few things, if thats what you mean :) It's a completely different ending now and it makes tons more sense.

no problem, i already sent in that i wanted it deleted :)

thank you. i like my disclaimer. :D

really? i changed that too, so im glad you liked it :)

thanks so much! im going through and editing all of my chapters so this will come very soon!

thanks so much cass!!


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Review #9, by ur friend who's getting VERY confused!!! For Better or Worse

29th July 2007:
YAY!!! Actiony!!! YAY!!!
But why are you being so mean to poor Ron?
Trying to make him evil or something?

Author's Response: Trust me, its going to be all explained. :)

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Review #10, by ur friend who thinks she finally got this Night of a Lifetime

29th July 2007:
Ok i have only one thing to ask.
Is anything exciting going to happen???
Like anything really bad?
And is Ron bewitched or something?

Author's Response: Read on...

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Review #11, by ur friend who is now VERY confused. Disco and Rude Red-Heads

29th July 2007:
do u hate Ron or something!??!?!?!
my gorshness!
:-P
great chapter though!
*two thumbs up*

Author's Response: I don't hate Ron, I luv him -huggles Ron- but he desperately needs to be evil in this story. Sorry! :)

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Review #12, by ur friend who really has no clue how to work this still. Thoughts on Hogwarts

29th July 2007:
i'm a tad bit confused.
how many day swent by???
ok, i'm not a bit confused.
i'm ALOT confused!!!
help.

Author's Response: Why does it matter how many days went by? Keep reading, it should sort things out. :)

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Review #13, by ur friend who thinks she finally got this right! Nightmare Surprise

29th July 2007:
lol!
i LOVE this chapter!
plus i think the Weasley twins are pretty cute and kool!
but most of all i just LOVE this chapter!
best i've read yet!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #14, by ur friend who STILL cnt figure this out A Sorting Message

28th July 2007:
O!!!
Why does he hate her so much?!?!?!
i thought Ron was sweet and could never hate anyone!!!
other than Malfoy and Voldimorte.

Author's Response: Ron's evil just for this story, trust me. :)

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Review #15, by AngleOfMercy Silence is Golden

28th July 2007:
I Loved it can't wait for the next udate.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try to update as soon as I can!

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Review #16, by ur friend who cnt get this right!!! Dreams Really Do Come True

28th July 2007:
AWWW...
SOMEONE HAS A CRUSH!!!

Author's Response: :)

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Review #17, by blackdog8 Undeserved Detention

15th July 2007:
It's pretty good so far. And I love how much of a prat you made Ron. It's hilarious. And was that wolfsbane opotion that Snivilus gave Amanda?

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's a lot of fun writing Ron evil. :)

That was not wolfsbane potion... :)

Thanks for reviewing!!!


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Review #18, by Wand Maker Extraordinaire Undeserved Detention

8th July 2007:
What a cute story! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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Review #19, by JamesandLily4ever Undeserved Detention

6th July 2007:
Nicely done. (I finally caught up!!) Okay anyway... you're going to have to reveal the truth of Haley any time now to take away all suspicions And I'm talking seriously (Siriusly too). Oh... and is Amanda a Vampire or Werewolf? (I'm working with both in some of my own fics. ;])

Catch ya later and update soon!

~Meli♥
P/s: My rating is 10/10!! Keep up the great work, dude!

Author's Response: You'll just have to see what Haley does... she's a smart girl, she'll know what to do.

Amanda... *smiles to self* has something weird going on doesn't she? You'll have to wait and see what it is. But I'll tell you something. She is neither Vampire nor Wereworf...

Thanks so much for all of your reviews! I was so excited when I saw I had received eleven more reviews in one day!!


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Review #20, by JamesandLily4ever Protecting Me

6th July 2007:
Nice work done here. What's Haley going to say? (Haha, you've got me hooked on, dude. :D)

~Meli♥

Author's Response: Keep reading... :)

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Review #21, by JamesandLily4ever Strike One, Two, Thr-- I'm Going Out!?

6th July 2007:
... I'm going to read some more...

~Meli♥
P/s: 10/10, dude, and keep up the great work. (My blood just drained out of my face and I'm impatient to read some more!!)

Author's Response: Awesome, I'm glad you like it!!

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Review #22, by JamesandLily4ever Just Friends?

6th July 2007:
Whoa... creepy... and interesting. :D Keep up the great work, dude!

~Meli

Author's Response: Thanks so much for all of your wonderful reviews!!!

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Review #23, by JamesandLily4ever For Better or Worse

6th July 2007:
Wonderful chapter, dude! You've got my interest hooked onto that piece of parchment.

Keep up the great work!

Reading ahead,
~Meli♥

Author's Response: Yay! Thankies!!

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Review #24, by JamesandLily4ever Night of a Lifetime

6th July 2007:
Try using the old editor next time (the double spacing in the new one kind of... spaces out the story completely). Anyway, um... where's Ginny? ;) You get my drift, don't you? Ginny likes Harry and is trying to get to Harry like when she finally made it in the sixth book -- she'll be a good rival for Haley. Add some spice to the story and turn it up with some jealousy.

Oh well, that's just a suggestion. You don't really have to take it on (and since I'm way behind... of course not).

Reading ahead,
~Meli♥

Author's Response: I haven't really thought about Ginny... she's more of a main character in the sequel. It's a good idea though! Thanks so much!!!

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Review #25, by JamesandLily4ever Disco and Rude Red-Heads

6th July 2007:
Nicely done... "Weasel..." dude, you know that Harry's going to take Ron a little seriously...

Anyways, I noticed since the begining that Haley would go like Harry and Pitter like Potter. :] I love the creativity of the girl name there.

Keep up the great work anyway!

~Meli♥

Author's Response: Yes, Harry takes Ron very seriously... it's scary...

I'm so afriad that her name would sound cliche, that's what everyone said on the boards when I put her up for Sue-bashing. But everyone that's reviewed said it was creative. So I'm a bit confused...

Anyways thank you!!!


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