Awesome. It was excellent. Keep doing what you love to do. Keep doing this too. I love it! :) !0/!0!

Author's Response: Aww thank ya love

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I have to say I was suprised. I was expecting a short little one-shot, but this was fantastic! I loved how you changed the view, it helped understand what each character was thinking. 10/10!!! I'm adding this to my favs. which I don't do with one-shots. *frowns* at least I don't think I have any one-shots in there. I'll have to check it out later. Well anyway, after I'm done with this review, I'm going to go see if you have any more stories for me to read! ~ lovinrain

Author's Response: hehe, thank you, im truly honored to be one, or few if you do have others, of one-shots on your favorites :)


thanks for reviewing

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I understood it fine! Its a great one shot!

Author's Response: haha thank you, thanks for the review too much appriciated :)!!

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this is a really good story,
write a sequal or something its really good

Author's Response: maybe i will but not right away :) thanks for reviewing

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loved it

Author's Response: thank you very much

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awww iloved it!!

Author's Response: thank you i'm glad you loved it

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BEAUTIFUL! BEAUTIFUL! You could continue this story!

Author's Response: Thank You very much, I could, but if i were to it wouldnt be for a while because i am working ao a novella right now, this kinda put me back into the swing of things :)

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I loved this story!

Author's Response: thank you very much :)

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