please continue the story please and thank you

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hmmm so this nick is a prince, interesting.

A little hint though, i really struggled to read some of this, you need to spell check, its good though post soon.

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hmmm this new person seems great. But why did harry faint, and how was it he never spoke of nicholas before???

Author's Response: harry fainted because there is amount of power in him that he doesn't know about. But im trying to show that harry and nicholas are the reincarnation of some people who is from the past in the time of the founders of hogwarts but im not going to spoil it for you. The reason why harry hasn't spoke about nicholas before because nicholas was in hiding just like harry years before, he tell his friends because they don't understand whats going through his mind execpt somone who has been through it.
Hope that answers your questions. Thank you for reading my chapters

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Im confused...but i like being confused.please write more

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Needs Capital Letters! Punchuation! Spelling (I'm not that much better)! GRAMMER!

Other that that its a good start.

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hmmm.... just a segjestion but it sounds like you rushed...

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I thought that it was a GREAT fanfiction please update soon even though i don't like Harry and Hermine i liked this one lol

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