{reviewid: 1041839, reviewer: 'just_a_memory'}
29th June 2006:
dev. you're slackin! WE WANT MORE!! GOSSHHH. *waiting while tapping foot*
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{reviewid: 1014750, reviewer: 'LilyMaria'}
7th June 2006:
OH! That was lovely! I'm usually a Lily/James person, but I really like this story! Keep writing!
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{reviewid: 1011545, reviewer: 'AurorAudrey'}
4th June 2006:
ehhh...
it is going tooooo fast.
tooo much like Lily and James, switch it up a bit, getting monotonous.
slow down.
explain stuff out more.
give it more character, like it is so flat-- like you rare just telling me the story-- i dont feel like i am there.
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{reviewid: 999955, reviewer: 'Potter%20Freaks'}
25th May 2006:
I love this i can not wait to read the next one YA!
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{reviewid: 999933, reviewer: 'Potter%20Freaks'}
25th May 2006:
This story rocks so far
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{reviewid: 999232, reviewer: 'Ms%20Fred%20Weasley'}
25th May 2006:
Loving this story!!! Great Job!!!
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{reviewid: 993703, reviewer: 'chocoholic'}
20th May 2006:
hahahahaha. this story is so sweet...keep writing cause i'll be checking in! Okay?
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{reviewid: 993389, reviewer: 'FalconFeathers'}
20th May 2006:
*eating dinner* Reads Chokes on food from laughing
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope ur laughter was a good thing! Well thanks for your comment!
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{reviewid: 993257, reviewer: 'KristenBlack'}
19th May 2006:
Well so far I love it! I can already tell that this will be a great story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy you like it and i hope the next chapters are just as good as you said the first two were!
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{reviewid: 990633, reviewer: 'just_a_memory'}
17th May 2006:
I loooovvveeeeddd it..WRITE MORE!!!!! love you mucho, Jessie
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