wow! That was amazing! I hope that's really what happened in the book!
now i really started crying. that was beautiful. you are extremely good at this, especially for your age, it's quite incredible. you have great control over the english language, you stick so well to the characters, you give one a deeper insight into the person's emotions and thoughts, one could almost believe it was something rowling herself was thinking. stunningly beautiful. Author's Response: Oooh, thanks so much, you're very kind!! Meep, I donno that it's very JKR-esque, but I do try to make it good. ^_^ I love to write, after all! Thanks again! Much love! Report Review
cheers. You hit it right on the cue. It was beautiful, it was bittersweet, and it needed to be said for closure. I agree with every word you've written here, and I only hope that everyone on this sight reads this story because it really makes you understand somethings, a lot of things actually. Thank you for writing this, keep writing more, ok? -Siss:)Author's Response: *squeak* my my, thank you so much!!!! I greatly appreciate the comment!! That'll definitely inspire me to write more!! ^_^ Thanks again, uber muchly! (uber is a fun made up word, no?) Report Review
that was sooooo well written i absoulutely LOVED IT!!! U ROK hehe
i really loved the bit were she sed "hes my weakness, but tonight, hes my strength..." it sounds so poetic and profecianal....well done!!!!!!!
Author's Response: ooooh, thanks so much!! I greatly appreciate it!! ^_^ Professional, yes, well... ^^ hee hee *hugs!* Thanks so very very muchly!!!!!! =) Report Review
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