Nice. Very nice. Did you intend to switch out the Weasley twins and make George dead instead of Fred? I'm not being critical...I've always prefered Fred. Can't wait to read the rest of it.

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This is really intense, and I like that. There are not a lot of writers who can actually capture the intensity of the situation they are writing about. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read the rest.

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omg.you're very depressing.but i liked it. I have read many, many works of fanfiction in my life, some bad, some HORRIBLE, and some like yours, which was really good. I swear, please keep writing.or i'll beat you with the book that i hide in the library.

oh...and you think i wont.
PEACE!!!

Author's Response: Lindsey!!!!! I promise I'll tell you.

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it that the end??well if it's not keep on going please it's so good!

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I like the idea about Harry being one of the horcruxes, but its really sad. I like it so far, can't wait to read more.

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Nicely written... I like the way it isn't a typical "it was a gloomy day" beginning. I'll be checking back to see where you take this one. Just don't make it too predictable or too excessively angsty and I'll be happy! :P I don't have a penname yet, but when I do, you have to promise to read my stuff!



hugs,

Izzzie. (yes, there are meant to be three 'Z's in that! DON'T ASK!)

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awwww the *sniff* is *sniff* soo*sniff* sad*sobs*but yet so *sinff*good. Update soon

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WOW you really now how to keep someone on the edge of there seat. You've got to write another chapter soon, I'm hooked already. You get a 10

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????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????HERMIONE KILLED HARRY!WTF I LIEKD IT UP UNTIL THAT POINT BUT DON'T TAKE THIS THE WRONG WAY KEEP WRITING AND I WILL KEEP CHECKIGN BACK

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Wow, I really like this. It's very well written, and I'm interestd to see where it's going.

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bloody hell thats amazing!!!!

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wow wow wow wow wow you totally just blew me away. Your storyline is awesome very original yet really believable. I hope you keep writing cause I'll would love to see where you take this.

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that is so sad and heart felt i cried update it soon please


Author's Response: Thanks!!!!! I haven't been able to write (I've discovered AFI and I haven't been doing anything that isn't related to them for a month!) I also haven't been sure where I wanted to go with the story, but now I am, so maybe the words will start flowing!

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it is really good so far! I'm so excited!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks!


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*laughs crazily* You killed off Harry! *applauds secretly* Well done! ^.^ So good so far! Summary sounds intriguing...can't wait for an update. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! As I'm writing this I'm about halfway done with Chapter 2, but
summer fun + being busy + writer's block= no motivation. Just kidding, as soon as I find time the second chapter will be up.

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ooh...intense...update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try!


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