I'm not a Snape person, so I can't really say that this was my favorite story, but it was still very good. You gave a great description of Snape's emotions. The ending was very abrupt (but in a good way...) and it kind of left me there thinking, "whoa, what just happened?" for a couple of seconds. It was a pretty powerful ending. I noticed a couple of places where I think that commas should have been periods, either because it didn't look grammatically correct, or because it would have made it more powerful... but I'm no grammatical expert. Report Review
Hey, i like it a lot. Who was the second girl that screamed? Hermione again? Anyway, i liked, please write more!!!!! Author's Response: The second girl was Hermione yes, I am glad you liked it :) and i'll try to write more. Plz, if you liked this one, check out my others. Report Review
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