I loved your story! I know the story is a one-shot, but do you think you could write another story to go off of it, like a sequel? I so read it. Report Review
a really nice one shot, with nice flowing diologue. well done! Report Review
Cute, kinda weird in a way, but very true and CUTE!!!!
~N~Author's Response: Everyone thinks it's cute. Which, I guess, it is. xD
Anyways, thanks for reviewing. Report Review
it's very cute. and i think someone is rather experienced in this matter of love.... : )Author's Response: Naw, I more just understand life..the universe and well, everything better than some. I like to think of myself as more experienced in matters of life, the universe and everything than normal people my age. Anyways, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review! :D Report Review
that was so cute....Ron should NOT take advice from Harry. *puts hand over Harry's mouth*Author's Response: Tee hee. Perhaps not. Harry is, of course, quite awkward in the field of girls.
Thanks for the review. ^_^ Report Review
well first thing...i rele lyked this story,
second....thats rele unusual...i dnt lyk one shot stories
BUT u ddi a great job i rele liked it well done :)Author's Response: Thank you. Report Review
Brilliantly written. I thought it was sweet and adorable. =) Thanks a lot for writing this story. I needed something like this to read.Author's Response: You're sincerely welcome! And thank YOU for liking it and reveiwing! Report Review
REALLY REALLY CHEESY but it is REALLY REALLY GOOD cheese!
I love it! keep writing! I can't wait untill 'a private matter'
I LOVE YOUR WRITING!Author's Response: He he. Vicky again. I don't know if I'll end up writing that one. A Private Matter. I just think too much stuff would have to be changed to make it fit... Report Review
awwwwww....this is soooooo sweet!Author's Response: Thanks. I like it, I think it follows the characters well, so it isn't too OOC, but it works as well..No? Report Review
it was good :)Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
thats was really good...it would have been better if u had sed how long they had been going out for and how they got 2gether, but other than that it was really nice :)
Author's Response: Well, I think, as a one-shot it should start in the middle of things, without much explanation. If you try and fit too many details in a short story than there's really no story, or not a remotely good one anyway. It's short and sweet and that's the point of one-shots. Besides, that information is severly irrelevant. Thanks for your review though! :) Report Review
Awww!!!! Such a sweet and beautiful story! Author's Response: Thanks muchly. You are my first reviewer for this story! :) Report Review
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