aw. thats so sweett :) i loveeed this story Report Review
haaa. i would have guessed it was fred. lol thats so funny, i knew it wasnt mrs. w. lol poor ron, that must have been akwardd, lol Report Review
awww Report Review
RON! yay. i call it she is going to walk into him!! Report Review
haaa, ron would. lol. aww. poor hermonie, but i doubt she minded that much.lol Report Review
excess phlegm. ha loved that part :) and yayay! off to the burrow we go! Report Review
awww :) i love ron, and he isnt even in the story yet. lol. great job so far!! Report Review
I love the story so far but you need to space a little bit more. But I still love it.
Author's Response: really? because a lot of people thought the first chapter was a bit slow and needed to move a little faster... or maybe you're talking about later in the story? but i'm glad you love it. maybe the rest of it will fix it? :) Report Review
Oh my GOD! I LOVE it! You kept all the characters perfectly as who they're supposed to be, but you made a lovely fic that sprung tears into my eyes! You're wonderful! Author's Response: ahhh! wonderful review!! thanks! Report Review
You have.the most AMAZING way with words...
So, pretty much, if Ron and Hermione EVER find love -and we all know they will- this is EXACTLY how it should happen! Amazing...simply amazing...Author's Response: awww, thank you so much!
glad you liked it! Report Review
CUTE!Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
I loved Ron's 'because you've got me, haven't you?' as if it were the most obvious thing in the world. You potrayed their shyness juxtaposed with how comfortable they are together very well. And excellent piece. Author's Response: yupp, that's one of my favorite parts from the whole thing. I reread this story every once in a while, and i'm pretty satisfied with it overall, but I really love the 7th chapter, which I wrote after a pretty long break, and after that my writing style changed a bit, to me anyway, i think. But that's my favorite chapter, and i really liked how i ended it too. Don't ask me to do that again, cuz i don't know how it happened. haha Report Review
You know how at the end of HBP, we were left with that sense of that one last day for the trio to enjoy...sort of like the peace before the storm, where there is time and oppurtunity to strengthen oneself? Well, you have encaptured that perfectly. A beautiful beginning. Author's Response: thanks, i've read so much fanfiction that if i read another beginning, i'm like, duh, i know that. but i guess if you're writing it, you realize that you can't start abruptly. So i realized that and i tried to get that sort of a not all tense feeling going on in there. thanks! Report Review
Hey, the story is quite interesting! The end part is cute. "i'll always take care of you." aww!
Oh by the way, I took in your critique, and decided to edit the story. Mind to take a look and tell me what you think? I'm trying to edit everything since summer holidays is coming and i'll have loads of times.
Fanks. :)Author's Response: thanks! i left you a comment on yours, check it out. Report Review
Sudha! Where have you been lately? You haven't update in forever on your L/J story!Author's Response: I think i'm gonna stop on that one. And I've had um... interesting stuff going on lately, so I've kind of been off my HP binge. sorry... But I'm glad you're checking up on my stories! I've figured something out though. I write when I'm not feeling so hot. But I guess right now I'm feeling kind of up, so I may not be writing for a bit. We'll see in about a month how it goes...
anyway, thanks for the note!
Sudha Report Review
aw cute!!!Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
awAuthor's Response: good? thanks Report Review
That was so sweet!!! It made me smile on the inside and out. Very nice. =))Author's Response: thank you very much! glad you liked it! Report Review
aw it was so romantic i cried!love it
-ilianaAuthor's Response: i love it when a fic makes me cry! Report Review
very well written and so in charactor!!!
I am literally sobbing into my keybored.Author's Response: ooohh one of the best reviews yet! thanks! Report Review
very well written and so in charactor!!!
I am literally sobbing into my keybored.Author's Response: :) Report Review
aww that isnt the end is it?Author's Response: sorry, but yes. it kind of moved into its own little climax, so i can't do much else with it. Report Review
aww that isnt the end is it?Author's Response: :) Report Review
I LOVE YR STORY!Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
aww, that was beautiful.
Yeah, shes loved. That
was an wonderful 'story.
I wish it wasnt the
last chapter, but it was
a happy ending. Keep
on writing. Author's Response: yea, that was my favorite part, just in and of itself. but i did like the whole thing a lot. I wish it would keep going too, but i really don't have the time, and my attention goes after about 2 minutes, so it's hard to keep writing so much. Report Review
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