{reviewid: 1505593, reviewer: 'onestop_hpfan18'}
9th July 2007:
i like it. it's really good. keep up the great work.
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{reviewid: 1395189, reviewer: 'Kyrra'}
26th April 2007:
Hey,
i've just discovered your story and i really like it. let me guess Connor's best friend is gonna be Ron and Leanne's Hermione?? I hope you update soon coz i'm enjoying it!
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{reviewid: 1289876, reviewer: '-'}
2nd February 2007:
I feel that Remus should have a happy life like that of his friends. i wish Conner is as happy as the kids of his age should be.
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{reviewid: 1265618, reviewer: 'Scarlet%20Shadow'}
14th January 2007:
how come remus and megan are like that now? is he cheeting on her or something like that?
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{reviewid: 1183600, reviewer: 'morance'}
3rd November 2006:
take out the word "babe" and put in love. thats how the brits adress each other. and even if they dont i just hate it when men call women they're babes.
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{reviewid: 1112533, reviewer: 'sirius_tragedy'}
21st August 2006:
Hey i really like ur story, i just think u need a beta b/c i've caught quite a few mistakes, like just mixing up names,or spelling but other than that i really do like the story and am anxiously waiting for an update
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{reviewid: 1063311, reviewer: 'Tinkerbell'}
15th July 2006:
AWESOME!!!
Author's Response: aw thanks so much I appreciate it
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{reviewid: 1040620, reviewer: 'Cowboy'}
28th June 2006:
Spelling and comma useage! Those are your two main problems, but besides that, I like your story.
Author's Response: I'm sorry I know my punctuation and spelling are horrible my teachers always complain about that. I try to fix it but it doesn't really work. I'm glad you like it and I hope you continue to read.
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{reviewid: 1022028, reviewer: 'megan_xo'}
13th June 2006:
Liv you have to update soon
i want to see what happens to us
Author's Response: it won't let me!! it keeps getting rejected!
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{reviewid: 1006282, reviewer: 'lovely_Lily%20and%20prankster_James'}
31st May 2006:
Why do Harry and Liam leave Conner alone? I know Harry n Liam r best frnds but i feel bad for poor Conner. PLZ do something 4 Conner. I love the story though. Its really nice. Keep on updating, can't wait !!!!
Author's Response: Connor will find a best friend soon don't worry!
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{reviewid: 1006030, reviewer: 'asdfk%3Bl'}
31st May 2006:
ok.....why do remus and megan fight? they really shouldnt....please dont have them break up so remus can get with tonks...thats just weird.
Author's Response: haha no worries they aren't going to break up
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{reviewid: 1005704, reviewer: 'jo%20smith'}
30th May 2006:
please add on! (right on!)
Author's Response: sure will
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{reviewid: 998214, reviewer: 'asdfjk%3Bl'}
24th May 2006:
good story line, but not only am i completely lost, your grammar sucks. the story rambles, there are no line breaks, which would help. u need a beta..... BAD!!
Author's Response: ok thanks for that but whats a beta
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{reviewid: 997826, reviewer: 'hpfan_091'}
23rd May 2006:
good good good!!!
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 995287, reviewer: 'moonylover'}
21st May 2006:
Love the story! please update soon!!!
Author's Response: aw thanks I will
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{reviewid: 989829, reviewer: 'megan_xo'}
17th May 2006:
YAY im pregnant
you have to update soon, but dont make me really mean, i want to be a nice little prengnant woman lol
Author's Response: haha you will be
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{reviewid: 985187, reviewer: 'Gryffy%20Girl917'}
13th May 2006:
I can't wiat until Harry comes into the picture!
Author's Response: soon pretty soon
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