I came across this story and I have to say I REALLY enjoy it so far! I noticed you haven't updated in a long time so please update and don't abandon it... For me? Report Review
Sometimes when I'm looking at the older stories, I shy away from the ones that only have a few chapters up- after all, I don't want to be sucked into a really good story only to have it "abandoned".
This story though, I couldn't help it. Although it only had three chapters, I just felt an irresistible pull. The last time it was updated was quite a while ago, but I hope you still read your reviews and come on this website. Your story has great potential, and I would love it if you continued with it. The story line is absolutely unique (from all the other stories I've read so far). You a managed to take a story line of Draco and Hermione being Head Boy and Head Girl, and add a really awesome twist that fits in really nicely with the story.
Awesome :) Report Review
With the plot of this story I'm very excited to see where it will go from here. It should be quite interesting and fun. Nice chapter, a little short but that's ok. I can't wait to read more! :) Report Review
Hmm it seemed that was a bit too easy of an interview. I expected her to have to model or something for them. She must have had some great pictures. :) Report Review
This story sounds like it will be quite interesting. I can't wait to read more! :) Report Review
Wow, this is a really new and creative idea! I can't believe Desire accepted Hermione! Well, she probably DID look pretty the way you described her.
A few of your sentences spoken by the characters did not include commas, and they should've.
"Remember those pictures we sent off on my last day at the Burrow?"
Should be: "Remember those pictures we sent off, on my last day at the Burrow?"
And "Wait, no, it's Ginny I'm looking to speak to actually."
Should be: "Wait, no, it's Ginny I'm looking to speak to, actually."
Just things like that. But the story is very interesting! Can't wait to see what happens next! Report Review
HI!!! I think that your writing has REALLY vastly improved since I first read mia zabini las, last? year!!!
Could you add me to the mailing list for updates on both stories??? thx!!! My email is bluedolphin9478 (yahoo).com Report Review
Very good! Although I would suggest adding a little more detail - it would add to chapter length, read satisfaction, and bring in more reviews! Report Review
I love how its going so far, Post again on both ur stories please I'm a fan of Mia Cadi Zabini as well! Report Review
I like where this story is heading, the characters are pretty good, and I'm really looking forward to reading more Report Review
Sounds cool. I didn't find anything that screamed error. Update! Report Review
Loved it and can't wait to read the next chapter. keep up the good work~ Report Review
very nice. just get more chapters. I lo e it... but I WANT TO READ MORE! heh, heh. ^^ Report Review
It's really good! I can't wait to read more!!! Report Review
I really need to stop reading stories that aren't complete! You're stories are so good, I can't wait for your updates! Report Review
Amazing! Loved It! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter! Loving Every Second Of This Story! Report Review
continue the story, s'il vous plait. I really enjoy the plot. Report Review
Ahhh I liked this chapter alot...I think that you could of probably discribed Matt better, you know looks and stuff. well hurry up with your next chapter! your fans are wateing. Report Review
Wow the idea for this story really just pop out of your head? It's good. I really like the beginning of the plot. So far i think that u could be a little more discriptive, it will really help your writeing improve. I know you said in the AN, but i think that you should put a discripion of Hermionie.
No joke i think that your story is really good though...keep it up!!!
XoXoX Heather Report Review
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! Report Review
This is good.
The idea is awesome.
I hope you continue. :]
Update soon. Report Review
could you e-mail me on email@example.com when it is updated Report Review
plz update its bin a while even on mia cadi zabini UPDATE NNEDD MORE CHAPPIES SOON! i love your story nice mixture between the smart and bushy hemione and the hot and cut kailee Report Review
It's very interesting that you made Blaise in the position of power instead of Draco. At first I was confused having forgotten that you are placing this story in their sixth year (even though you mentioned that at the beginning in the author's note) and so I was wondering why McGonagall was going on about Blaise hopefully performing well enough as DHB to move on to HB. I was also curious about Dumbledore being alive, but it all makes sense now. If only I would take more time to completely comprehend author's notes that have a purpose then I wouldn't have confusion.
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