This is a fantastic story, but I don't think that Tonks would refer to Remus as "Lupin" this a fantastic story though. You should be proud.
xox Lil

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awww cute and ver sweet

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that is an AH-dorable story!!!
*rates 10/10*

Author's Response: Yay 10/10!!!

Thanks for the review,

Paola

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Wow.that was a very good chapter.But i wonder if the time between the attack on Hogwarts and Dumbledore's funeral was a long time.
Anyways i hope u will continue with the story.

Author's Response: Yes, I didn't know how much time was in between so I just tried to foccus more on what was hapening than the actual timeline.

Thanks
Paola

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Hello it's me Hogwarts Mafia this is my other name, Just Email me at witchfiretonks or go here for the basics http://www.angelfire.com/planet/psychokitty85/harrypotter.html

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Hmm still a few grammar errors though. I really like the Bill side of the story better. It felt more realistic though I think it could have been a bit more. Tonks and Remus seemed kind of cliched, though it was still good. GoodJob. I also make Banners would you like one.

Author's Response: I'm so SORRY about the grammar errors, I'll check the chapter to see how many i can find and fix (Thank you)

I would absolutely love it if you could make me a Banner for this story, and if it's not to much trouble another one I have. Send your answer ASAYC, thank you again.

Paola Alejandra

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Ha..so the problems of both the couples are solved.I am really excited to see what happens next.Do we get to see Bill/Fleur's wedding?
Please update soon and i mean really soon,how about tomorrow??

Author's Response: I don't know about Bill's and Fleurs wedding.... maybe. Next chapter is almost done, I'll post it soon (if my computer doesn't go crazzy, again).

Thank you for the reviews...

Paola Alejandra

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I loved this chapter and specially the bonding between Tonks and Fleur.
Now let see how Remus handles a crying Tonks with a stubborn nature.

Author's Response: That was one of the hardest thing i had ever written, specially since they are so different women, I'm EXTREMELY glad you liked it.

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I love this! I appreciate the depiction of Tonks as being strong and moving on in a way. I can't wait to read the next chapter, where Remus has to win her over.

Author's Response: Yes I don't like to have Tonks crying all over the place, yes she is suffering and yes she cries from time to time, but she can't be a person without any character. I just don't see Lupin falling for someone without some back-bone. Glad you liked it.

Paola Alejandra

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Hmmm, seems to be good however I think you need to recheck it for grammarical mistakes other than that it seems pretty cool concept.

Author's Response: I'm really sorry about those mistakes. Believe me when I say I don't like them either. I am trying to fix them, so soon there will be a chapter with few of them.

I'm glad for your comment, they make me a better writer.

Paola Alejandra

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