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Review #1, by . A New Beginning

8th June 2006:
This is GREAT!

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Review #2, by Radcliffe_PotterFan319 A New Beginning

19th May 2006:
Hey, it's carolyn. Only got aroun to reading this now. It was a really good start. Good luck. I have a series of my own about harry's twin sister, only it's a whole lot different. Read some of mine if you ever get the chance.

Author's Response: Okay i'll read yours, thanks for reviewing and reading!

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Review #3, by tip on writing a preview A New Beginning

12th May 2006:
pardon me but if you make an incomplete story and devote half (approximately) of the emphasis on unwriten work it would be very pleasant for readers that you did one of two things:

1) dont write the story since it is incomplete to the extreme after seeing the preview, or

2) change your preview so that it suits the story more accuratly

Sincerly, a profesional reviewer

Author's Response: Thanks I'm almost done with the story it's just taking time to post. And yes i needed a better summary but it's ,my first one so i'm still learning!
Thanks for the advise i will definetly use it


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Review #4, by FalconFeathers A New Beginning

12th May 2006:
Yay I love it it's reeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllyyyyyy good keep writing.

Author's Response: Wow what a response thanks!

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