Look, this was lame except for the whole Hermione/Pansy catfight thing. And the ending, what the heck was that? 4 invisible wedding bands out of 10. Not even a pass mark. Author's Response: *insert a heavy dose of sarcasm* Thanks, you're so very kind. I'd have much prefered if you had signed in, then I would be able to read your wonderful and stupendous work!
I will admit to some flaws, but I don't exactly think that this story is "lame." Of course, I'm sure you'll never read this, but that's alright with me, I'm sure I'll survive. I appreciate CONSTRUCTION CRITICISM and don't mind it at all, this is more or less just criticism. Thanks once again! :D Report Review
O_o Wow. unexpected. but... ...good all the same, I guess. Report Review
u should make it a story really Report Review
you really should have this one-shot turn into a actual storyAuthor's Response: There are so many places to go with it. I was thinking about it but I haven't decided how I want the story to work, but since people keep asking it might become a full story when I have some more time to work on it. Thank you for reviewing. Report Review
Would Hermione and Pansy use the same 'cut your tongue out' threat within a minute of each other.
Other than not searching for a different verbal nastiness it is one of the better Draco/Hermione's I've read. Author's Response: Very true...but it was more of Hermione mocking Pansy. Thank you! I love hearing that people like my Dramione fiction! Report Review
you should make this a story because u could go so far with this and it is brilliantAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Pretty good! The summary really threw me off. I thought it would be about Hermione and Draco breaking up but it's not. They're secretly married! Even better!Author's Response: *smile* Thanks! Report Review
oh cool! but i doubt drakie would let pansy slobber and maul and harrass him whe he is married to mione even if they have to put a false front.Author's Response: That's true, hmm, I guess it depends how desperate the situation is. Report Review
I really enjoyed your story! You did a great job of capturing Pansy's and Hermione's characters. I especially loved Hermione's comeback. I hope you continue this story!Author's Response: Thank you! Continue with the story! wow, people really want to know more about their life, I might work on that when I have more time. Thank you for reviewing! :D Report Review
Go Hermione go go go mione! lol i love it!Author's Response: hehe, your review made me smile! Thanks! Report Review
i enjoyed your story but i kept me wanting to read more of their relationship before and after nice work thoughAuthor's Response: I keep hearing this but I'm not sure where to go with it so for now it's just staying as it is. Thank you! :D Report Review
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