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Review #1, by remembertoturnonthelight One last breath

4th March 2014:
Very good, but the grammatical errors are bothersome. All the "you're's" should be "your". You're is an abbreviation of you are, and your means possession, or having possession. Great fic! :)

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Review #2, by StarCherry30 One last breath

23rd November 2007:
OMG! haha I remember when you wrote this so funny on the lower field! haha when the teachers were staring at us? and we were like rolling on the ground laughing!! Good times!! miss ya M

Author's Response: haha, I remember that. Miss ya 2!

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Review #3, by sienna_starr33 One last breath

16th July 2006:
Wow...I think that was the most intense story I've read on here...Harry was very emotional in this was a great story!! I can't believe how good of a writer you are!! Please keep writing stories!! :D Thanx!! XxSierraxX

Author's Response: Thank you for saying that I'm a great writer, but I don't think that you give yourself enough credit. I love your story "Opening eyes". I'm really happy that you like the story! I figured that I had to write an angst one sooner or later it was actually quite funny writing it.

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Review #4, by Tini One last breath

23rd May 2006:
Oh my god, that's so sad and the end really shocked me!

Author's Response: Good! I kind of meant it to shock people. I'm glad someone had the reaction i was going for. Thanks for the review!

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Review #5, by SoulofSlytherin One last breath

15th May 2006:
Wow... Harry must have been desperate

Author's Response: Yes, well I imagine if you're true love died you would be. I had 2 write one depressing story, anyway.

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Review #6, by dw431 One last breath

14th May 2006:
my god that was so sad i am cring right now 10 out of 10

Author's Response: Wow. I never expected anyone to cry over it, but I never expected to get a 10 out of 10! Thanks!

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Review #7, by holly bergman One last breath

14th May 2006:
Rather depressing. Very good story, but depressing. I suppose it's what I should expect in the angst section...

Author's Response: Yes, that is what you find in the angst section. I figured I had to write a really depressing story to balance my other ones out.

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