Who's the main person? is it Lily or what?

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pictures yay!

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I like it

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I love this story but it was a pity that they had to die. And i think the ages are good.

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Oooh England what will happen now?

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It was great, exciting and everything a fanfiction need! *thumbs up*

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OK. I love your story, it has a plot that's so... original. I love original. It makes things interesting and unexpected. Keep up the fabulous work!

Author's Response: :) thanks a lot. i try hard to have plots that nobody else does, hopefully it stays that way. thanks for the review!!

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hey me again can u email me @ brittanywilcox_1@hotmail.com ? thnxxx

Author's Response: soory i haven't got around to it. i promise i will.
cass

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yeyy, go l-i-l-y!!! woooo, seeker. and her and des, ooh scandal... anh and her... hmm i want them to fight more, so lily can find some more newer friends, anyway, another great chapter. update soon cass. it's great so far!!!

Author's Response: hah, me and the real anh are in a scrap right now, so its funny you said that. Maybe its true in reality and fiction. *sigh* oh well. any way,
thanks for the review!
cass


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ooh, ravenclaws. yah i find gryffindors more interesting but still a good chapter. and lily's okay. yus. next chapter...

Author's Response: hah, ravenclaws bug the crap outa me, but my sister insisted ion being sorted in to ravenclaw whenever her character in in one of my stories, so i have to cope. Personally i am a mix of 3/4 Gryffindor and 1/4 Slytherin. lol, just to be complecated.
thanks for reviewing!
cass

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my computer really doesn't want me to review... but i am. love lily. and her and des. and ahhh. crud. hope she's okay, anyway, next chapter...

Author's Response: i'm really glad you like them together, i was a little ify at first, but a lot of people seem to approve, so, what the heck. I was origanaly have her "mingle" with Rubin, but i liked Des far more. Thanks for the awsome reviews!

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i've reviewed this chapter 3 times and it hasn't worked yet... grr. anyway. yey, go lily. i like her. and des is really cool. poor them though, 3 malfoys in a year, two of which are evilish... anyway, next chapter....

Author's Response: yeah, poor them. I wonder why the review hadn't gone through. Someother people complained about it too. thats wierd. Any way,
thanks for the review,

cass

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wooo, go lily. one of a kind, she sure is. loving the story... on to the next chapter...

Author's Response: I'm really really glad you think she's one of a kind. I tried really hard not to have her look or ack like a generic character.

hugs,
cass

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ooh so olivia finds out about her werewolf ness... hmm. is there ever going to be a time she forgets to have the potion... i wonder... anyway another brilliant chapter. on to the next one...

Author's Response: what a disaster that would be to clean up. (ug, i don't want to even think about it.) but, hmmm. interesting, that would be a good crazy chapter. Oh , and about the beta situation, i don't have a official beta. But as you can tell, i desperatly need one. I'll send you the next chapter if you want.

cass

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awwww how cuuttteee. go harry. he's just so awesome. what a shock for all of them... reunited after all those years... anyway, next chapter...

Author's Response: lol, go harry indeed, he's really trying very hard to be a good dad. I supose he's even a little guilty that he wasn't there all that time.

any way, thanks for the review!
cass

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awww. poor lily, olivia, patience and emma... that would be sooo scary... but again, another great chapter. i doubt that you still don't have a beta but if not i'd love to. on to the next chapter...

Author's Response: yeah, i kno. :( but i love writing drama.
:)
cass

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again. awesome. seriously. why can't all stories be as good as this one? anyway, on to the next chapter...

Author's Response: :0 thats so cool you said that! I'm blushing, really. My day just got better.
:)!!!
cass

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ahhh, wow.... sooo good. third time posted huh? wow, serious persistance. i read and reviewed the first one i think... but wow. just wow. i think this is better. even if it's the same one, it just seems so much better... anyway. on to the next chapter...

Author's Response: all these reviews made my day! I wasn't expecting any at all. Thanks for rereading and reviewing!

xxx,
cass

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good chapie u[pd8 soon

Author's Response: thanks, i'm trying really hard to edit the next chapter and get it out. thanks for the review

cass

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What's up with Anh? Haha, Lily's already been to the Headmistress's office…it runs in the blood. I like Lily with Des. He's kinda quiet and a bit shy. If you need any help, just email me! Oodles of Love from MissBrunette!!!

Author's Response: Anh is just a jelous friend. Its in her nature, especially grudges. But mostly she can be friendly. She's jelous of Lily, and she knows that Lily is much more adapted to the new world than she is. (ecspecially that she is on the Quiddich team and already has a guy "friend" and that she is really good and some things without trying hard.)

im glad you like lily and des. I will definantly email you soon.

cass

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There's a lot of werewolves in the world now…haha, it works. I think Olivia needed someone like her, otherwise she would have been a bit isolated…another good chapter! Oodles of Love from MissBrunette!!!

Author's Response: :) Yeah, brutal, isn't it? Voldemort breeded himself an army of them.
thanks for the review,
cass

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I like the fact that you recognize Lily's fears…it makes her human. Ah…Olivia is a Ravenclaw…but sometimes its easier to put them in different houses...Of course the Malfoy boy is a seeker. I like Des...he's like Sirius in how he defies his family...great chapter! Oodles of Love from MissBrunette!!!


Author's Response: Yes, I was worried with her "special power" that she would be somewhat like wonder women. I'm glad you realized my limp effort. And Olivia, well, she's the one with the brains in the family. You'll see how she keeps Lily's feet planted firmly to the ground, as Lily has a tendency to have an overly active imagination. I'm glad you like Des, he reminded me a lot of Remus for some reason, in a poetic whimsical sense. :) the extremely hot seeker would fit him well, but i though her needed a more brave and macho role, just to beef him up a little bit, he couldn't be all sensitive and poetic. lol ;)
thanks so much for the review,
cass

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yey go lilly i'm glad she made the team and i realy love this story
love
Charmed
xxx

Author's Response: :) I'm really really glad you like it! I'm trying to work on revisions on the next chapter. love your reviews,
cass

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Yikes, I loved this chapter! I love Des too! haha, wow. Great job, keep it up!

Author's Response: :) I'm really glad you did. It was one of my favorites, and i'm going to have to get along to writing the next chapter soon. Des is really different than the normal kind of guy i would go after in my writing, he seems like a poet more than a clown, doesn't he? but i think it fits. yueah, i hope so.
xxx,
cass

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hmmm, I don't know so much, but it's good!

Author's Response: hmmm? lol, details! come on! :) if it was a 'i don't know so much' kind of chapter, tell me why. Don't leave me hanging on an........

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