Reading Reviews for Not Going As Planned
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Katerina So unfair

11th May 2008:
OK this has really bad spelling and is really hard to read like:
not Hermoine. Hermione
not Freind. Friend
And there was other spelling mistakes, like when someones talking there are places where you put a comma and it's really hard to read.
5/10 for grammar and spelling

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Review #2, by candygurl4454 So unfair

21st May 2006:

Author's Response: thx

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