That was so well done! I really liked getting into Hermione's head. And it was nice to see how she felt about ROn. Great job! Report Review
okay that was sweet. i totally love this story! it was just right!!! Report Review
Wow, that is soo sweet, and good, and, your a great writer!! Really! I think that all that flashbacks made it even better. Great story!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
great story! im glad harry walked her down the aisle, it would have been really ... mean of him not to! keep writing + have funAuthor's Response: I totally agree. He had to put his differences aside with Malfoy for his best friend. She's more important to him than his hatred for Draco. Report Review
Very cute. I like it. I like how you managed to describe well how much Draco and Hermione changed enough to love each other and have Pandora and Trenton. Though I would like more information on how the Weasleys and Hermione's other friends took the news of Draco and Hermione's relationship.
I like how you began their story by Draco saving Harry's and Hermione's lives. For some reason, it was one of the things that I expected would happen in the books. It would show that despite Draco being an arrogant prat, he still has a conscience and a heart.
RienneAuthor's Response: Yes, he does. As we've seen in HBP. Report Review
beautiful stroy. your words really flowed. great jobAuthor's Response: Thank you. Means a lot to hear that. Report Review
That was very good. I really liked the way you wrote the story. It's obviously ahb-vious, that Ron and Hermione would end up together, if everything was happy-happy. However, if Ron was to die, who knows what would happen. There is also an indication in the books, that Draco Malfoy is not going to be a cruel Death Eater. I am generally not a Hermione/Draco shipper, but this one was more a reality than a fantasy. I really liked how you mentioned that she loved Ron, but knew that she couldn't be with him, and that made it really good.
10/10Author's Response: I personally hate Draco/Hermione, but I had to try it out. And Im surprised people like it, seeing as how I've never even read a dramione story before, so I'm proud of this. Thnx for the review,. Report Review
that was beautiful! Report Review
wow!that was brilliant!!!!
I don't know what else to say!I really am stuck for words...
I've always imagined Hermione and Draco getting together but now I see it through a totally different perspective!
A big thumbs up!Carry on with the good work! Report Review
This is how I can tell a Dramione supporter from a none supporter. U brought up Ron too much. RARELY do Dramione fans mention Ron unless it's to diss him. I've read over a thousand Dramione stories so I should know. I mean, come on, if Draco felt that Hermione was using him as a rebound, like it seemed, he wouldn't have married her. Also, they were sort of awkaward with each other. It was somewhat uncomfortable @ times. And I would think logically ron's funeral WOULD HAVE been postponed for his two BFFS. Come on, think COMMON SENSE! The name Pandora is cool though. Also, the wholeHarry-is-an-unsurpportive-jerk and the Weasleys-don't-like-the-wedding-idea-but-are-going-to-pretend-they-do don't work for me. Harry is pretty compasionnate, people and he's be considerate of Hermione's feelings. The Weasleys see Hermione as Family so I think they'd try to talk to her and not be hypocrites. And Draco was a bit too passive for me. He was like a side prop in a photo shoot where Hermione was the main model. I've just seen other ppl pull off A Hermione POV without shunning Draco a bit better. Lastly, Hermione spent too much timewith her daughter and not enough with her son. No mother shuns a child that way! This all may seem harsh but I'm like that sometimes and the REVIEWs are a democracy, meaning we all have opinions. I don't care if u hate me, it's my opinion and after all, Democracy is the only way. 4 Pandoras out of 10. Author's Response: Hmm, well I guessed you guessed right because I AM NOT A DRAMIONE SUPPORTER. As I said in my A.N. I acctually HATE dramione, and could care less for it, but I felt like writing it. I'm not always going to stick to the H/G fluff which I usually write, so I felt like writing this, and feel good about it, so honestly anything you say I could give a rats ass about. As for bringing up Ron too much, I was trying to get across the point that Hermione would never forget about him. He was like, her first love. You NEVER forget about that person, even after your married. Of course any sane person would question at some point on their life the 'what if's ...' if they had married the other, and I'm trying to point out that Hermione is as sane as the others. AND, I highly doubt that Hermione would diss Ron, even if she was with Draco.*Raises eyebrow*
As for Hermione and Harry not being at the funeral, it's kind of hard when Harry was intended to be like, half unconsious, and can't really do anything, and I highly dioubt the Weasley's would've waited while Ron , like, rotted, just for Harry to get out of the 'coma' he was in. And yes, Hermione does see the Weasley's as family, but the position she was in, she was angry she could not see someone she deeply cared about get buried, like she wished to do.
As for Hermione paying more attention to Pandora than her son, who was kind of sleeping at the time, unless she wanted to wake him up, and have him fussy, well yeah ... BUT her son was SLEEPING, unlike her DAUGHTER who was AWAKE. Hmm, put two and two together, and you get my story :) Report Review
I loved your fic! PLease update. I was wondering if you could make me a banner? Report Review
this story was so sweetAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
this is the most..... i dont even have aword for it. its just so goodAuthor's Response: Heehee. Wow, I'm speechless myself :) Report Review
this is the most..... i dont even have aword for it. its just so goodAuthor's Response: Heehee, thanks :P Report Review
Awwwww.....th@ was beautiful!!! Gr8 job!!! Basically all I can say!!!~JaymeeAuthor's Response: Shank you :) Report Review
This was so good, although Ron had to die. =(. But in my opinion, I think Hermione pays a bit to little attention to Trenton. 10/10
-ginnyslittlesisterAuthor's Response: Heehee, yeah true. I didn't really mean to have him in the fic, but I really wanted to use that name. So I just made him sleep the entire time :) Thank you. Report Review
Two words: Love itAuthor's Response: Thank you :D Report Review
geumndoboeuerte!!!! Author's Response: whythanjhtoyou! Report Review
One word, 'Cute'.Author's Response: Another word 'Thanks' Heehee =) Report Review
This is a fantastic one-shot story. At first I thought Draco was dead because the titled is called Memories of a Malfoy but he's not. She's only reminiscing on the past. Author's Response: lol the title was a no-brainer. I couldn't think of anything. Yesh. =) Report Review
Please write a sequel or something as this is brilliant!Author's Response: Aw thanks *blush* But nah, I'm no good at writing H/Dr. I may do a one-shot sequel of Trenton & Pandora as teenagers, but I cant think of anything lol. Glad you liked it. =) Report Review
Why did you name the kid Pandora?? It reminds me of Pandora's box? Is that why? Anyway, great story!!Author's Response: I have an account over at Pandora's Closet, a gfx site and I've always liked that name, and it seems hermione/malfoyish to me, so there it is. But not, not from Pandora's Box. Pandora's Closet, yes =) Thanks. Report Review
i think its good
write more-cause some ppl just write some then stop-its so ah-noyingAuthor's Response: Well I'm not the one to abandon a story unless I have a good reason, but this is only a one-shot *points to summary info*. So yah. Glad you like it. Report Review
this was a great storAuthor's Response: thank u Report Review
Erm, thanks for clearing that up Grammar Goddess, although the way you put it is a bit weird... Anyway, beautiful beautiful beautiful description. I can actually picture myself in the story, watching it all happen...it's enticing. I don't think I found any serious grammar errors, even though I DID browse through it. I love the names Pandora and Trenton (usually if Draco's son is a boy, his name would start with a D, or...even worse, actually BE Draco Jr...) This is a refreshing break from the usual D/Hr stories, and it's quite remarkable that you wrote it so well, even though you don't particularly fancy the ship. Overall? Hmm, I'll say 9/10, for the amazing word flow.Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you could. That's what I was going for. I like those names too. Seem very malfoy-ish. I always wanted to use Pandora, and Trenton, erm, well long story and if my friends this they'd die of laughter. EW. Draco JR? OMG hah. Thank you. And yesh, I hate the ship acctually :P Report Review
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