i really do love this story but one thing that makes me wonder is one of these days the burrow s going to topple over with all the people living, it was already mega crowded when they were teenagers lol. oh and i love the whole fred george angelina alicia (aka old quidditch team) and hary ron and ginny (aka new quidditch team) it makes me wonder that when the kids all go to hogwarts that its not gonna be the gryffindoor team its gonna be the weasley potter team (mind u if theyre all in gryfindoor) any way great story i should really stop babbling!!! hehehe Author's Response: lol! I don't mind babbling! As long as there's a review! Always happy to get feedback. Thank you so much! Report Review
Loving it!! Awesome story, it had a lot of things going on and i like to keep it busy. But it should be longer and have them go on vaca. or something!Author's Response: Well sooooorrrrrrrryyy, Nellie! I'm glad you like it, and I'm working on a longer one. I'll let you read the long one before I put it up here. Have you read the other story? e-mail u later! : ) Report Review
Very good I really enjoyed it! 9/10Author's Response: I'm glad. And Thank you sooooooooo much for the review = ) Report Review
interseting, moves along quite fast doesn't it...Author's Response: yes, I know it moves fast, but I was bored, and felt like writing a R/Hr fic, and I did. I actually have it illustrated on my side of the internet. Oh! And thank you sooooooooooo much for reviewing. Report Review
So cute. ; )Author's Response: So happy you liked it. Please keep an update on me, and look out for some new stories! Report Review
This story was so cool! I agree, it was a little bit rushed with the timing of everything, but you made everything sound like it fit! Good Job!Author's Response: Thenk you Thank you Thank for reviewing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have been, like, the first reviewer in like, a month (or something like that =) ) Thanx! Report Review
A great story with a great sense of point-of-view. I'm not just saying this because the writer's my friend, but because I know its a great story. Good job, Mad!Author's Response: Thanx 4 reviewing, but I guess it was kind of expected of you. . . . *wink, wink* Report Review
cute storyAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! =) Report Review
i love the song "i've got you"!! great story...Author's Response: Are you a fellow country fan? P.S. glad you liked the stroy and thanx 4 reviewing. Report Review
i think detail is essential in this story. to really enhance it, you have to have slightly elaborate on some of the sentences, and really add to it so the reader is really pulled into the story and wants to keep reading. it's a nice idea overall, but it seems more like a good begining that still needs to be completed and shaped.Author's Response: Thanx. I'll work on it Report Review
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