{reviewid: 1870165, reviewer: 'TheDirigiblePlum'}
20th March 2008:
I love the way Harry describes Ginny with her standing right there!
It must've been so hard for him to break up with her :'(
Very sweet, didn't make me cringe at all, as these sort of things usually do :)
10/10!
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{reviewid: 1570400, reviewer: 'nobody'}
12th August 2007:
that was awesome ! ur a great writer.
Author's Response: thank you!
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{reviewid: 1556851, reviewer: 'lola1'}
6th August 2007:
i really like that its a shame but its sweet
Author's Response: thanks.
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{reviewid: 1556749, reviewer: 'hasini_harrypotterfan'}
6th August 2007:
This is really good :)
Author's Response: why thank you. :)
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{reviewid: 1556698, reviewer: 'Court502s'}
6th August 2007:
I loved it.
You should deff keep writeing.
I would love 2 read more of your things.
=]
Author's Response: ur sooo sweeet! :). i'm going to continue. ^_^
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{reviewid: 1556248, reviewer: 'cannis_lupus'}
5th August 2007:
Very sad and depressing but well written. Good job.
Author's Response: thanks.
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{reviewid: 1556221, reviewer: 'ginny_hermionefan'}
5th August 2007:
beutiful! i love it.
Author's Response: aww thank you!
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{reviewid: 1017437, reviewer: 'Headgirl%20writer'}
10th June 2006:
Great Story. Keep up the good work and keep writting. I would love to read more of your stories.
Author's Response: thanks.
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{reviewid: 1016727, reviewer: 'jujuju107'}
9th June 2006:
you need to write a sequel
Author's Response: maybe in the near future.
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{reviewid: 1015557, reviewer: 'thebandbuddy'}
8th June 2006:
WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????????????????????
Author's Response: ?
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{reviewid: 1014525, reviewer: 'no%20name%20yet'}
7th June 2006:
that was sooooooooooooo awsome!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1013561, reviewer: 'pottergurl'}
6th June 2006:
this is realy good and it's only the first chapter! please update soon
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my story. Though I won't be updating soon, it's a one-shot. Sorry.
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{reviewid: 1008927, reviewer: 'Bittersweet%20Ending'}
2nd June 2006:
No! Fate can't tear them apart. How dare it! Ok, sorry for the mini rant. Great story, short and sweet. The only thing I noticed is that Harry doesn't show any emotion on his face, nor does Ginny. I need to know why she yelled, and that she realized she was being too loud. Description of emotion is the only major thing I would try to improve. Still, it was a good story, and I hope you keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and the advice. I really appreciate it.
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{reviewid: 1005062, reviewer: 'moneyj57'}
30th May 2006:
Very nice. Well Written. I wish it was happier. But good Job.
Author's Response: Thanks.
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{reviewid: 997715, reviewer: 'Tini'}
23rd May 2006:
I love it, it's so sweet. but it's so unfair that they love each other and can't be together
Author's Response: Yea, I know. This one-shot is angsty.
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