That was nothing short of magnificent, what I really liked about this one-shot was the way that you portrayed Bellatrix, though she was a cold blooded murderer she was still human she still felt pain, mourning and even affection for her sister.
I actually felt pity for Bellatrix and Narcissa, which is a hard thing to come by as one is a seemingly useless trophy wife and the other is the definition of a 'Homicidal Maniac', they've lost everyone they have loved and soon enough they were going to loose each other.
Very well done, I can't wait to stumble on another one of you're stories
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Yes, Bellatrix is a homicidial maniac... human, but still a maniac. But that's what I love about her. :D Report Review
This quote: "'His hair stuck everywhere, so we had to wax it down for years. Finally in Third Year it lay still on its own… silly boy…'" made me want to laugh even though this fic is very sad. I had the image of Tom Felton having his hair smothered with lots and lots of gel by Narcissa.
Great job once again. :] Author's Response: Hehe, Thanks for reviewing! Have a cookie. =D Report Review
i liked it...it was so sad
im growing rather fond of one shots nowAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I like one shots too... sweet, simple, to the point. =) Report Review
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