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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by timeturner My Escape

5th June 2006:
Lovely descriptions here and I liked that you were able to pull off first person so well, which is often hard to write and even harder for a reader to read. Not here, though. You did a great job pulling me into the scene and carrying me along with the thoughts and events. I like that he's on his way to Harry (a very fitting end and leaves it open for more from this perspective). Great work!

Author's Response: Thank you Linda! I know that I asked for your review, but I really love to get input from some of the best authors on the site (yes, I mean you). I'm also very glad you thought I pulled off first person, and to tell you the truth, it actually wasn't that hard to write. I just get pulled in and let some of my emotions flow onto the paper/computer screen. Well, thanks again for the fantabulous review! -Tamara

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Review #2, by Lyn Midnight My Escape

4th June 2006:
Eek. That’s just like a sequel to the first chapter of my story Nemesis. See, in the first chapter he is still at Azkaban, and in the second, he is out of prison. So that fits in between! :P Yeah, it really is interesting, the way he escaped. But the chapter is so short. Anyway, I really REALLY like the title. And, of course, think that Sirius deserves it the most. Will the rest of the collection be about him, or will it be about the other Marauders? Cannot wait to read on!

Author's Response: Thanks, Lyn, for all the fantabulous stuff you said! I really really really love hearing from you. And the rest of the fic (if I ever get any more plot bunnies jumping around in my mind about Sirius) will be about Sirius, the other Marauders might be featured, but everything is based on Sirius in this collection and I'm very glad you like the title. -Tamara

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Review #3, by lairyfights123 My Escape

20th May 2006:
Well--this was basically just a very long description that really had no plot or anything and the fact that we already knew it was going to happen wasn't downplayed by the fact that the delivery was exceptionally good. It just seemed like--well---what he told Harry in POA, you know? Just, deeper. This could have been written a lot better with this theme, which isn't a bad. But, really, this wasn't as bad as this one fic I read today--I couldn't believe it actually got appected! This is like The Da Vinci Code in comparison. . . Good job.

--lairyfights123

Author's Response: ...I think half of this is good and half is bad? Well, thanks for everything you did try to tell me. I really appreciate it all!

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Review #4, by Jessi_Rose My Escape

16th May 2006:
Hey lovely! I'm so excited that I offered that topic!! Anyhow, onto the review...

I think you did a good job getting inside Sirius' head while in Azkaban and during his escape. It's always a hard thing to do; especially because the Dementors effect him differently in dog form. Bravo for that! You made it believable, and more than believable, very likely. For that, I give you many kudos!

I'm going to add this to my fave's so that I can keep up with Sirius. :o)

~Jessi



Author's Response: Aw, my unnormal psychotic ex-sister from another life has left me a review! (if you don't know what this is, don't bother asking) Thanks, Jessi! I love when you leave me encouraging advice! I don't know where I would be as an author if it weren't for you. Thanks again! -Tamara

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