{reviewid: 2419669, reviewer: 'Harry_Ginny_4eva'}
3rd October 2010:
I love this story- but one question-
it says they're dancing like they're in the 70's, but aren't they in 1978?
Great story though!
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{reviewid: 702151, reviewer: 'sparkleeyez'}
20th September 2005:
its a little rushed but i liek it
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{reviewid: 487909, reviewer: 'Anonymous'}
4th May 2005:
Wow! U really do hate Peter!
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{reviewid: 487900, reviewer: 'Anonymous'}
4th May 2005:
lol plates... u mean pleats???
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{reviewid: 487891, reviewer: 'Anonymous'}
4th May 2005:
I luv ur discription of their dresses!!!
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{reviewid: 487886, reviewer: 'Anonymous'}
4th May 2005:
Hogsmeade
:)
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{reviewid: 487881, reviewer: 'Anonymous'}
4th May 2005:
AAAAAA!!!! MUST...KILL...PETER... lol jk REALLY good story!!!
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{reviewid: 378336, reviewer: 'AppleBz'}
16th February 2005:
I like the story line but your story is very rushed. Lily and James' parents die and then a few minutes later James is asking Lily the the dance and they are joking along with everyone else. Mybe it's me, but if my parents were murdered it wouldn't take a matter of minutes for me to feel better. But good story anywho!!
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{reviewid: 264042, reviewer: 'Ginevra%20Potter'}
6th November 2004:
lol, that was just hilairious! my sister doesnt see the joy in hp so she is starin at me like im some kind of fool!
~Jill
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{reviewid: 49126, reviewer: 'beatriz'}
6th July 2003:
oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!! u have to carry on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 48721, reviewer: 'Kaydee'}
4th July 2003:
Chapter 5 was great! Rita is on SOB I never liked her in Harry Potter!
Kaydee
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{reviewid: 48722, reviewer: 'Kaydee'}
4th July 2003:
I liked the sixth chapter and I\'m moving onto the seventh but I have one question. I thought you said they were in first year? I have to things to point out not to be rude;
A) There being so musshy that I think there older
B) You put this line in your story “You’re as bad as a first year, ok, let’s go!”
I still loved it!
Kaydee
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{reviewid: 48723, reviewer: 'Kaydee'}
4th July 2003:
Cute! Snowball fight would be very funny between a girlfriend and boy friend.
Kaydee
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{reviewid: 48724, reviewer: 'Kaydee'}
4th July 2003:
I like it alot, but can you tell me what year there in?? Write more soon!
Kaydee
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{reviewid: 48606, reviewer: 'SilverMirror'}
3rd July 2003:
I don\'t really like Lilly/James, I don\'t know why I even deiced to read this! lol. But anyway, I think it\'s really cute, you did a nice job. Though it\'s kind of hard to believe that they are only 10 or 11, they seem to be acting older to me, but that\'s just me. :)
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{reviewid: 48631, reviewer: 'Kaydee'}
3rd July 2003:
I love the first chapter I\'m going to read more...
Kaydee
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{reviewid: 48632, reviewer: 'Kaydee'}
3rd July 2003:
The maradures rock! I think it\'s gay that they didn\'t put Lily\'s name on the map! Great second chapter on with the third...
Kaydee
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{reviewid: 48633, reviewer: 'Kaydee'}
3rd July 2003:
It sad to here that Lily and James\' parents both died in this forth chapter, and don\'t worry I hate Peter too!
Kaydee
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{reviewid: 48634, reviewer: 'Kaydee'}
3rd July 2003:
I love when girls don\'t give into the guys, great fourth chapter.
Kaydee
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